I’m Normally into those ...heart racing, steamy oh my gosh so in love with the ml type of romances novels and/or those torture my soul with a relatable heartbreaking tragic romances... But to keep it all the way LIVE this is theee best novel and that’s out of my normal genre without a heavy romantic setting. Being a girl of course I’m a sucker for romance, but this novel was like a much needed vacation after a drama filled binge. The Introduction of characters is so refreshing, I can’t help but feel attached or relate to certain aspects in a character or moved by the dedication and fighting for self improvement. Even the fight scenes make you wish it was made into an Anime show, it’ll make you laugh and cry or make you cry from laughing, but mostly it’ll have you at the edge of your seat cursing the author for not updating fast enough!!!(ahah ? but we still love you LOP) This novel is so wickedly written, its not some cliche or rewrite of a classic, this is hella freaking original and let me tell you I guarantee that if you even read the first chapter you’ll be hooked, so join us on this cultivating journey.
I really enjoyed this story. Which is rare, when there harem elements. I wish you'd continue with this book. Not enjoying the new Harvest Dungeon anywhere near as much.
Yet another case of an interesting idea ruined by poor writing. Honestly this is one of the worst quality cultivation novels I've ever read, and that's saying something.
I love the story overall. I find that I'm now checking daily for updates, compared to some of the other novels I'm also reading. The story keeps me intrigued and suspended about the next crazy idea the MC will do or joke around with his distinct sense of humor. Love the work.
This is a review from the beginning to chapter 26. This novel is a great novel to read if your looking for a overpowered MC, it also includes in depths of emotional intelligence. it gives the novel a great Vibe of 'what would you feel if you where there'. So far author has no grammer errors which makes this a must read novel. I don't really see the comedy but I could be blind. the one thing I like about this novel is that it goes into details a bit into other things instead of the MC all the time. Overall I would give this book a 5/5 Star.SpoilerI find it interesting that he hasn't thought about saving his points for future upgrades.For the author: I think you have potential to make this novel better, I like this novel because of a similar novel that had a person upgrade his stuff. I think you can work more on your MC upgrading himself I don't see how much times he upgraded himself. It's a great read thanks for writing this.
Great story!Great mc past!Mc not too op.The pace is not too fast but not too slow i think.Its remind me the top 3 fiction in qidian about korean-france boy that sick then got system and become superstar but author drop it.Is this monogamy or harem??
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Translation Quality: should get minus point.The translator of this novel is totally sucks.. he just keep skipping all the good parts in a chapter. Like in chapter 189 in the morning after waking up Li Yi shoved the thing inside Little elf(Yang Rong) from behind while she was on the phone and start another big battle,, in another chapter 296 where LI Yi touching Jiaojiaos thigh under table and reached the mysterious zone, that's why she jump up and go to make dish.. There are lot like this critical information this damn translator didn't put in the novel.. This translator just keeping us readers Deprived from all those juicy funs.. This is a total sin,.. Translator should repent his wrongdoings... There is no SPOILER in my comment cause the translator didn't even put it in the translated novel in the first palce.. [i get those missing parts in machine-translated version. But those translation sucks.]
This novel's comedy is just hilarious! To all the Overlord fans out there, if you like the interaction between Lord Ains and Demiurge then you SHOULD read this! Just Read!
Interesting captivating and thrilling, nice one author keep it up, can't wait for the next chapters.So loving this novel like no man's business.
literally my only problem with this novel is how horrible the grammar is. And by that I mean that sometimes you can go like two or three paragraphs without seeing anything bad but other times you can read an entire paragraph and have to completely restructure it yourself in order to have it make sense. If you wanted those people that just likes reading on autopilot and doesn't really care what you read and you just want something to read then I'd say that where the grammar is right now to perfect go but if you don't then I would wait till the author fixes the earlier chapters and even later ones from what I've seen him some of the reviews and just clicking through them. The premise is pretty cool in my opinion but it's just hard to get past the first ten chapters if I have to constantly take myself out of the immersion of the story every like three sentences to fix an entire paragraphs worth of words because they're written in the wrong tense, the words are almost completely scrambled and sound like someone's blabbering in a language they don't know or just something similar. I'm sorry if this review seems really harsh but I feel like giving honest opinions is what can help some authors instead of just saying that the grammar is kind of bad because it would be an understatement of my opinion. If you end up fixing the grammar at all I will certainly come back and read this through but until then I don't think it's worth it because it's just too hard on the eyes almost it's hard on The Soul Man
Try it. I guarantee this is very different from I AM ACTUALLY A CULTIVATION BIGSHOT or I AM THE MC, WHY DO I SUCK AT CULTIVATION.I already read all near 300 chapters. And believe me it was much better than I anticipated it to be.