I have really enjoyed reading this book. I hope you will resume updating the story soon. As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!??
I love the story so far.....the character is good....the plot is nice.....Hope the author can still manage to update the story i really waiting it, and this one nivel is the most i like
Why is this removed in the Trial Read Section?!?!? I hope that this would return.Anyways, although the first chapters is repetitive, it explains the world he transported in while slowly making the main character a character(he now has a personali-insectality). It seems like he is the only one who has a system, but everyone and everything could evolve. Very little are known about the world's history yet but we do know that there are Gods, Magics and Demons. WHY DID I FORGET THE EVOLUTIONNNNN. A 5 out of 5.
so far at 51 chapters this story is rather good, the characters interact with each other that same way one would expect long time freinds to and the mc is refreshingly human in his mistakes while not doing anything that would seem illogical, try out the first 40 free chapters first but I believe as long as the author continues this it will turn into a great story
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I have high expectations regarding this novel, especially coming from the author of one of my favorite novels, I will wait for more chapters to come out to finally delight myself with this delight, by the way it continues like this :D
Found this while searching something to read, the site has a lot of hidden gems it's just that the search function it's awful. Worth the read, really good fighting scenes even if the world bulding leaves a lot to be desired, same with the descriptions.
Brutal translation speed and zero communication has killed this novel. Hopefully qidian responds at some point and we get back on track. Started as a great translator but unfortunately real life became too much and this has been dropped
It got transferred here? Well then, let continue the epic story! I saw this one WW and I have to say the story so far 100 chapters that I have read, are very interesting.
it's like saying Issac Newton discovered gravity so he was able to manipulate it, this story makes no sense. This is like the author wants to see him self as the MC of this story and is venting himself on people he couldn't in real life.
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This story is for you If you line modern lifestyle thrown into immortal/mystical hidden word. Novel titles like - I may be am immortal, dragon King's son in law, resonates deeply with this sort of writing style. A quick touch of cultivation thriller + modern world anarchical situation ie no one sect/family having sovereign supremacy ensures unique plot unlike the xianxia/wuxia trope where mc literally provokes the supreme top dog. This story development is 5*, character development is 5*, content delivery is 4*, meme reference is 5*.But the story progression is too slow! I would recommend sitting out this one initially and binging on it after sometime as the author leaves you asking for more.The last thing I would say why I would recommend this story to you because is the uniqueness of this story. Everything is done here on balance (uptill now) there's no fail safe for the mc in this story like future vision, hidden cultivation, or back to time or some dao granting your invulnerability. Instead there's this **** grandma who would give you enough safety to make sure the generation is continued if MC's life is at stake on the very expense of his *yang-ki*. Yes the great grandma a top dog needs his internal energy to sustain her powers.