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So, I usually do not even read on this app, I mostly just write because it’s my passion, but I saw this book and it looked really interesting. Welp. It is. I love when writers open up with a strong and impactful chapter right off the boot, and I hate when it’s those basic “my name is so and so and I’m so and so years old and I look like so and so and this is my life” it’s boorish and boring to read. I love when you set the world and describe the looks of characters through the story itself, not just plainly explaining it, and I can say without a doubt, the opening chapter on this book is phenomenal. It sets up the stage and explains what the world is like, what the people live through, how it all began, gets your intrigued with “what the heck did that?” (No spoiler as to what I’m talking about did what) but it is extremely good and a very intriguing plot idea. Stop reading this review and read the story.. don’t waste precious time. This book is worth the read.
Damn, another translated novel from WW just been stolen. Poor WW, your hardwork are just a thing they can actually just... snatch. I hope people whos managing here can just be honorable enough to do their own stuff and not just stealing other people's work.
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The plot is just okay, from the first chapter it's kind of somehow but as it goes it gets interesting...Do not get discouraged that u don't understand what it's all about in the first chapter, just continue and you'll understand.Good job author
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This is such a interesting gaming story. Wish for the story to continue so we can know the plot in the later chapters. Wishing to know if the main character has any development in the real life with his neighbor. HAHAHA
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Bit slow at the begining i mean lets be honest at the time he was lether working you were also like when is he gonna slay some dragons but for the rest it’s a fun read and there are some worldbuilding element in the first few chapters so it allright.
So, the book was for a long time my favorite read on a daily schedule. The character develops at a good pace the system is intriguing. However, the way it ended today, feels like a big middle finger from the author. The last 25 or so chapters you can feel his need to rush the story along, but he (the author) finally decided he was done and wrote probably the worst ending of all webnovels I've read so far. So if you are looking for a good story from beginning to end I suggest you look elsewhere.
The only thing I dislike about this novel is that the MC is super stupid. He does such basic mistake even in the late part of the story. If not for the plot Armor he would have died 100 times.