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Bro I love this kind of novel... I want novels with same concept plzzzz @#@##@##@########2#####1###$@###$_##$$@#$#@#$$#$$########33#######3###
Oh god. This novel is freaking awesome.The chapters are nicely named, the prologue, even though it was an info-dump, was written so well that it didn't feel like that at all.The writing quality is superb, and I loved how everything created a sense of tension, from the first chapter.The only things I'd suggest to change are the words "A few years from now". Usually, these words aren't used for describing something that is already happening (in the story timeline, the future is the present), so perhaps change it to something like "In the year 20XX". Just a suggestion, though.Otherwise, great work!
Author mary I love youuuu............. forever I love you............. not as a person, but as an author........... I'm a gay but!!!! I love youuuuu! keep writingggggggg
This is the worst MTL garbage I've seen on the site. The original story is OK. But the translation is hot garbage. I've seen authors with bad English here writing their own novels. It's not exactly fun to read but I can appreciate they are trying. This is blatant laziness. It's so lazy characters can have their names swapped. Males can be referred to as she over and over. Or the same name is literally used as every characters' name for some reason.
I like the system and the Plot that author make.
And teh story is good. .keep it up, I'll waiting for your updates [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Interesting synopsis. Waiting for the trail read .
The agenda of a young university student:He always carries the family legacy with memories of his parents and siblings.Marking the daily life of his new status. Each chapter is more active and the romance... arrived!
I believe everything happened for a reason in this world. The Almighty God sets our destiny in this world perfectly and no such accidents in life. But after reading your novel, I really want "this accident" happens in my life! I want my own "Jeffrey". LoL!! Thanks, Author.... Keep writing... 5 stars from me.
Raw title: 我在东京当和尚Status: 252 Chapters (seems to be on hiatus)................................................................................................................................................
At first I thought this novel was going to be a cliche-breaker. For the first time ever I had though we - the audience - will be reading a story from the perspective of a character who is usually the mini-antagonist (2nd generation wealthy heir template) but as the story progresses the MC slowly but surely reveals himself as typical Korean hero template 101. Why even bother to integrate the mafia aspect when it plays absolutely no role at all. The synopsis hinted at greatness; the story failed to deliver.
Just read the synopsis, and I have added this story for review under my own collection of criticism.The synopsis has many inconsistencies that hopefully will be addressed in the actual novel, but if not, I shall point them out in my own book.
Why did u use another account for this novel Author? And anyway its a good Story And Since I Like it Why Not Rate it 5 Stars Like Who Cares About The Reason Anyway
