So far the author has done a good job with the book. The writing style and flow have no errors within them. While the book may be about cultivation which has become a somewhat bland category, the author offers a unique concept to this genre with this book. If done right it could end up as a great novel, and so far it has been good.
Great novel overall . The MC may be Naive and easygoing at early chapters but he has Strong Unbending Will to keep moving forward. Great waifus as wellThe story is a very dark and grim at early chapters betrayals,manipulations and stuff. Well this novel is full of suffering. But Good character development.SO ANYWAYS I STOPPED READING THIS NOVEL. WHY U ASK??with how things is going im sure one of the MC waifus will die or get stolen or NTR i guess??possibly so because this world is very cruel. And im the type of person who gets great anxiety just thinking about it my loved ones suffering. Every chapter gives me more anxiety so i stopped reading. ANYWAYS if you're the type of person like me stop reading this.ABANDON ALL HOPE YE WHO ENTER HERE!!
Not gonna lie this book is so bad, not one character is likeable besides one. the start of the book is 9 chapter flashback that wasn’t even remotely entertaining, and the main character doesn’t even know how to accept reality. I only got to chapter 19 before I stopped, and I had to skim through it all before I got there. Only redeeming quality of this book that I see is the amount of updates.
interesting premise, the flow of the story is quite good too. i need more chapter to give my final review but for the time being it's good.
It's a good novel. I don't currently have the energy to write a proper review so I will just say my thoughts.Writing quality: I'm not a native English speaker so I can't give a 100% accurate review but I think it's good.Story development: It's still very early in the story so there isn't much to say but it's currently pretty good.Character design: The Mc with how he views everything is very irritating in the beginning. I know that he only views it as a game but his lack of interest in the "lore" and complaining about how realistic the game is. It's just very irritating to read. The other characters are good but they lack enough chapters to get fully developed. Still, they are all mostly enjoyable.Updating stability: It's currently good.World background: The world-building is good but the system appears to little. He doesn't have any status screen. While he can get missions there isn't any specific way how. There also barely exists a way for the Mc to consistently grow stronger.Another small problem that will be solved in the future is the game itself. From my understanding, it's a real world and multiple copies of the game were sold so shouldn't he find other players? That is of course unless his exclusive copy was the only one that let someone enter the real world. Still too little is explained about the game itself and those that sold it. Not that it's a real problem since it will be explained in the future.
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Hi, Author san is here.This is a pure game based game, built for game nerds like me, who love action based RPGs, like the witcher and monster hunt games.The pace of this novel is planned to be fast, with many monsters and dungeons to narrate, with minimal real life events, so simply put, it's a pure game based novel.I have built a complete and complicated game system for this novel, so diverse and well planned for future chapters.I promise you this game would be much different than many others you read before, with new faction system, talents and skills opened to anyone he wanted to learn them, plus huge variety of monsters, dungeons, and quests.the fighting system here is based not only on using skills in row, but on the personal experience of each player, so even players in the same class would fight differently, with many skill sets to be used in many different ways.The new merging system introduced here won't disappoint you, especially in later chapters when players can open skills belonging to other classes, making the skills used have much variety that would seen even new.As for our Mc, Bloom, as mentioned in the synopsis, is an NPC transmigrated to be a player in the past. He would start up as a regular swordsman, but eventually, due to the wrecking deeds he will commit, he will unlock a new class, Bandit class.He will continue his journey as bandit, with a huge dark organization he will build, with another life to others as a normal swordsman, which will add more complexity and fun to the main story.The novel isn't just about the MC, as many side characters will have the chance to shine as well, depending on their role and their potential in the main plot.So, simply put, if you want a new game based novel, with so much fun and so much game mechanics, this is the best place for you.I will wait for your reviews and opinions about the game, hopefully you will like what I made.
A captivating story full of rage, energy and intrigue. Easy to read. The text block is smooth, everything is clear. The only mistake that caught my eye after reading the 7 chapters was the incomplete title page. No title, no author. In general, it’s very serious work. Which proves the number of readings.Author, good work, quality content.
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