I love it already, to many it may be confusing in the beginning just as the author states, but just keep reading, things begin to get explain and pop out to you in understanding, this novel is very eye catching to a reader like me and i hope the author keeps up the good work till the very end!!!
Devon here, If I want to encapsulate the book, I would say it is heavy on daily life and relationships. I really like the fleshed out world which I tried to implement here.There will be hardships but being a heir of the conglomerate comes with a lot of perks.It leans heavily on slice of life territory but as the story progresses into MC's adult life, more action and spontaneous events will be included. Some people criticized MC for acting like too much of an adult. But because he is an Overpowered character with a knowledge based ability, nerfing him becomes a challenge.I have a solid direction for the book and I hope you will accompany me throughout the whole way.
The writing quality is ok but not especially great.The updates are sometimes stable sometimes not...The storry development is not especially bad, but does not make much sense eather.Characterdesign is the big problem of the storry. Characters seem to make their choices only to bring forward the plot and do not have their own motives.The Ideas for the world is an slightly original esper setting. Sadly the premis ruins the rest of the setting.
As I should , imma Give my book a great Review . Also, please Give me y'all opinions about my book,do y'all like the start? cause I got a whole lot more chapters to adapt on Webnovel.
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This was a great read, the detail used and infomation given was clear and concise with the characters and their animal counterparts being well thought out and utilised. Loved the story and hoping that this novel gets the attention it needs so the author can keep writing.
what the ****? why is this novel in the romance section? is it only because the protagonist is a female? that's so fucking wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!wrong!
I like the story plot. interesting!
The story was very detailed. It was good. I like how the author made it. It was like a professional estimated novel. Good for the readers who can understand better. Notw: I skipped the news and more. I scanned it. 10 for the scene. 8 for the dialogue. Over all almost 10.
More update please. I am loving this book
The story was good but the ending sucked. I also had a hard time reading it with such bad grammar and mistakes.
great. one