DaoistCv4412
This is amazing, I’m absolutely loving this and it’s quickly become one of my favorites. I have zero complaints except for grammar and I don’t even really care about that. Can’t wait to see where the story goes, excited for the next chapter!
This is great novel and I'm not saying this to just make you feel good I'm serious I'm literally shaking in anticipation for what happens next
I quite enjoy the story so far, especially with the way the system is portrayed - it's not OP but it does work aas a plot armor, i mean read chapter 4 you get it...but the rest is good...i enjoy comparing the before and after stats change, it feels like the mc is growing...and the military radio call was done very good...does the author actually do radio calls? why is there no mech? i know there's like a power suit, but no mech yet? please include it would be interesting to see a mech fight...
I made the 5 star review because i am confused with WN review system.1. So let's start with "democracy" that many people feared. No, the MC didn't just relinquished his power in the government like how the UK monarch and most constitutional monarchy did. (If some of you has some confusion with the definition constitutional monarchy, it's basically a monarchy based on the constitution. So you can write whatever the F you want in that constitution, and if the majority or every single one of the top brass of the country agrees, you can effectively become a dictator.) So in this story, what the MC wrote in the constitution is that he made himself the executive of the government, commander in chief of the armed forces, etc. Just imagine the power of any president that acts as their country executive branch with the difference of no election or terms since the MC is the king. He needs to abdicate or dead. The democracy exist only in the legislative branch.2. Next I saw a criticism that there is only 1 royal guard. If you read it carefully, the MC got tons of guards surrounding him. Of course they would only be mentioned in 1 phrase or sentence. The one guy that is always with him is the chief of royal guards, so he had the rights to be present wherever the MC is.3. Personal life of MC. Nothing special happened, the characters involved exist for the sake of existing, especially the love interest.4. The reformation in labour. I have seen many people criticized this part saying it's too radical and doesn't make any sense. Yes I do agree it's very radical considering the era of the story, however it's necessary to be done to appease the hungry and angry citizens. The thing that is a pity would be that there is not much explanation on the consequences of such radical reform. The author just glossed over it and make it seems like there is no fight from the capitalists. Similar thing happened when the MC reformed the regional government, changing it from viceroyalties to electoral positions like we know in most countries.5. How the MC run the government. The main thing of how the MC do his job is that he would do anything to ensure the safety of his empire, family, and citizens. He didn't really care about other countries and their citizens. It can be seen with the war against yamato arc or him sending 2 fighter jets with air to ground missiles to destroy stolen military vehicles in a village.6. Finally it would be grammar and writing in general. I don't have much to say in this since I don't have much knowledge in writing. So I have no complain on grammar. However on the writing side, I am confused with the title of the MC. In some part he was mentioned as "Emperor" and in some other parts it was "Tsar". Please make it consistent.Final score: 6.5-7.5/10
This is a beautiful story. The science experiment story is beautiful. The beginning is filled with suspense, wanting to know the full story. The characters are also easy to remember. I’m really interested in reading the rest of the story. I’ll encourage maintaining the strength of characters
the concept seemed nice but it's trash.Alle the first 25/30 chapters (and i mean ALL) are only about how trash is the class of the mc. You are forced to hear the opinions of practically the entire school and their grandmas. If you take away all the comments about how trash is the mc you probably won't have even 3 chapters worth of plot
I request webnovel to release this novel. it is very interesting and fun to read. Please release this novel . so, the readers can enjoy it. I don't how many people will like novel but many has already liked it.
From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more.Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish.
Impressive I am planning to buy your story so where can I contact you because your story has the potential so can we continue the talk in gmail
One of my favorite books that I have read.
This review is only 7 chaptors in and this definitely has good potential. Keep up the good work Author-san
it's really good but I'm not really used to gay mcs so I'll stop reading this, I'll give it 5 stars though. Although, it'd be great if the author informed us that it's gay in the synopsis/tags. Ps: I don't hate gay ppl, I just have different preferences so don't attack me lol
