this fanfic is amazing. Don't drop plz i love the idea and it has amazing potential
Boring and unrealistic
The potential of the story is really good, I have been wanting to read something like this for some time already. And the way the MC is I can’t wait to see more situations in the plot
I do not seek to offend or insult anyone, it is my point of view.The novel has an interesting concept and premise.As for the rest:The mc feels stupid and meaningless, he trusts and falls in love EXTREMELY fast (in a matter of 1 paragraph or 1 chapter- I meet) just like the MC's girls, the romance is close to 0.There is no clear world development.The power system is totally unbalanced and with many inconsistencies and no senses.The mc's plot armor is at unnatural levels, equaling or even surpassing goku from DBZ or issei from DxD.In summary:A novel that could have had great potential, wasted by a lousy development.
has this been stoppped? due to bad rating and comments... just keep doing the story and I will likely read it more, i like how fast paced the story is and making the MC OP lol
This novel is not bad if you can ignore few thigs I could not.I would say it is absurd behaviour of other characters. I mean how they treat MC, it is just ridiculous.
This story is a gem that is a mix between cultivation, action, romance, comedy and adventure, if you like those genre i advice you to try it The Mc is really funny, kinda remind me of The Strongest System's Mc but i find this one more funny And while it is a harem the character all are well introduced and we can see them gradually fall in love with the Mc (not like typical harem where girl is just see Mc, fall in love with Mc for no reason) same with the Mc he doesn't just see hot girl and is like i want her, No we see why he start becoming close to her and how The world is gradually explained little by little just so you can understand where he is, what is around him, and why is he here . Info dump are rare there is some at the start tough Can't really comment on update stability as i started this novel 3 day ago x) so i will give 4 starThat's it for my review
So first of beware that this novel isn't too serious a novel. So if that is what you're looking for I would reccomend you to look for something else. Now that we are past that the writing is of good quality besides a few typos here and there I can't seem to find much errors in it. The mc's character isn't all too deep, but I feel the author is trying his best and besides it is hard to make a deep and relatable mc in novels like this. World seems interesting with stones that allow for people to reincarnate and how the tribulations are decided be a bunch of scummy immortals. Updates are pretty stable and good in amount, the only time there where no updates was when the author was moving out so props for that. Yeah I guess that's about it all in all its worth a shot.
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WN why bring something that was already done long ago like really now. There's some good reads yall can translate but don't instead bringing old things which won't see past chapter 40
MTL read it. It was below average, the only thing it really had going for it was that the protagonist was a good guy, and some of the villians got to be redeemable, but turned into harem, ofc, and for someone born on earth, he became pretty arrogant and cliche very quickly. By the 200s of chapters, he mind controls some random girl (who in all fairness was contributing killing intent to him), and the first thing he has her do is massage his back for him, then not even a chapter later, holds hands with some girl, decides she is his woman, and he will be ruthless to anyone who even thinks about her...yeah not my cup of tea. If this is picked tho, can translator not repeatedly call some of the girls who end up in his harem little girls? Like over and over they are called little girls, then they contribute eroticism/lust to him, so Im thrown off bc their actions and how they speak are childish af, not how someone over the age of 12 would act. The MC, a 17 year old, calls them little girls, but then theyre freaking have s** dreams and lusting over the mc?? When they say little boy in this, they are always kids, 6 or 7, but when they say little girl in this, how old are they actually?? Rant over
A nice story to read... Although at the start there are some similarities of some novels like having a system then a seed of tree of life but its not totally the same. The flow of the story is different and the writing is superb. I just hope that it will not be a harem...huhuhuhu, although I don't totally hate harem novels but sometimes it just make the story lower the standards... sorry...Overall, it is a good novel to read and I hope it will be picked....