As all bias author's I can say with certainty I worked hard and I believe I did a good job. Hope you enjoy my novel and Ning Fan's second life. If you find anything you believe I should fix I'll consider it and keep it in mind but the direction of the story shall not change even I'm excited to see what's next hehehe I will try my best to keep up with everyone's pace not too fast that people can't enjoy it but also not too slow where everyone loses interest.
I am reviewing my own story. I recommend you give it a try. it is a story of a guy who gets stronger by eating an exotic beast in a parallel world. I hope that you will like it.
There is a confusion in tenses. Characters are detached and it makes it difficult to feel empathy for them. The flow of the story is forced.I would suggest building more on character development and the settings. Info dumps are also a huge issue.
I hope the world gets to read this book, I hope it gets the space to appreciate the strength of everything human and to feel their empathy about knowing how hard being strong might be..
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I don't really know how to say this but this book feels nice to me. It feels amazing! I mean like...WOW even if they wrote something wrong it would still be understandable. I just like this book... That's all
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Yo, might as well review, which I rarely do.Characters funnny and original. I love them all.Story development good as well, not to fast, not to slowUpdates are good.World building is amazing, it was clearly well thoughtout.Would Recommend.
Yes, I'm giving it a five star.why?It's awesome.secondly, I won't say much about the novel. I'd rather let it speak for itself. It starts off different to other system novels in my opinion. But the fun begins straight from the start.A villain mc is something I didn't know I had in me. But look what we got here.
I loved the first volume 10/10 for me but i hate second volume same amount.It is too long and boring to be fair i did skim trough last 100 chapters because i couldnt bear with it. I hopr next volume will be better.
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