good try but the writing quality is poor. also the story development seems to deteriorate around 20's we jump from a trial to all out war. very confusing. with an editor and a little bit of rework this could be a great book!
Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part.Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too! Definitely worth a read so far!
*Raw name*Astral Apostle星界使徒*Brief Introduction*The star realm is a world full of myths. The strong will always be an eternal topic. Human beings have found their own place in this disputed world with their own power. However, the door of the alien world has been opened, and the dark ancient gods are resurrecting the youth of the alien world, the elves of this world, fighting for the ordinary and working hard for happiness. He gave up his deep hatred, he rejected the power of eternal life, but fate's mercy left him bruised and bruised. Where to go, a life of humiliation is still the light that burns life. This is a story of the growth of a strong man...
Dear readers, Way of the Devil has been released up to more than 30 chapters!!Thank you all for your strong support! Though some may have felt that the novel has a slow start, those who have read till chapter 30 will quickly realise how well the first 30 chapters have set the stage and built up the suspense for the explosive action that's about to come! Lu Sheng's world is highly intriguing, dangerous, frightening and addictive. From here on, sparks will fly, mysteries will unravel and heads will roll!Currently, the release schedule for Way of the Devil is 1 chapter per day, every day except Tuesdays and Thursdays. There's also a Discord server specially created for all fans of Way of the Devil, where you can chat, air your views, ask questions & guess what's happening next! Kurisu and I will be there waiting for you! Here's the invite: https://discord.gg/qkFVEaPIf you like this novel, please post a positive review! That will increase its visibility so that more readers will learn about this epic novel and get to enjoy it, as we follow Lu Sheng's journey along the Way of the Devil!
this novel is a masterpiece, it made me cry. its not your usual plot armor novel, it really make feel to be in a true cultivation world. love it, love the mc. pitiful but good mc.........
Well let's do another review about a book we couldn't possibly read right this moment. At least will be completely impartial, right?The cover: a guy wearing a chinese hat looks like it's wiping some grass of the ground... The chinese cover is even more helpfull: some clouds and mountains - wow!The synopsis: The usual generic - can describre almost anything - summary.If you think it another way, it's almost like voting in a political election, hum?
if the roles were reversed this novel would have never gone out.The mc is a beta who got raped by some cultivator who used some forbidden technique to forcefully take away his yang energy which wuold have normally crippled him (it won't matter since it says he has a system) then gone away and came later (after 4 years) because she got pregnant (4 daughters), all of this while talking to him like he is trash.Now he takes all this as if nothing and is fine with it. All in all a beta.P.S. before she cripples him he saved her life
This is my Review of the Story......It's a good read for Beginners who are okay with the Tags and description given in the chapter and don't think that deeply about certain things...Writing Quality: 2 star ★★There are mistakes in grammar, wording, phrases and such but not that difficult to understand..Story Development: 3 star★★★Pacing is very slow but it's alright because the ending of the story is just apart a small mistery of MC's origin, other than that he just have to take some more girls and powers..Character Design: 2 star ⭐ ⭐ At the start it was going okay but at later it turned out to be bad especially MC(?) I don't like MC's personality that much in most cases..Updating stability: 5 star★★★★★Author is very good at this ?.World Background: 2 star★★As of now (chapter 315+ something) the details of the world are not that good needs more work on it like places, things and such.......I'm just here for the plot, some powers and artifacts other than that... .Maybe a Spoiler for some people so... :....MC's personality turned out to be worst in later chapters, well depends on the people reading that, but (for me) his personality turned out to be sh* very bad at a certain chapter and him being passive against his girl is a totally different thing that is even more of a let down but I'm still reading this cause of plot, powers and artifact settings.....Still it's a good read for Beginners. ?
The language and grammar in the novel is extremely uneven but it does get better. What doesn't get better is the storyline and the MC. MC is a very unlikeable in character and actions. Don't want to go into examples but there are plenty. Also, the storyline follows your Dragonball power system. MC gets strong, beats the **** out of enemies and all of a sudden someone with Power Level 20,000 comes out when MC is at say 5,000. MC was sequestered for 5 years undergoing crazy training. He was the first user with best class... and there are bunch of people who got much stronger, much faster in that same time frame. Meh. There are many more annoying things about the novel. It's just not worth the time to read through it.
I don't have a well-formed opinion for the play yet, but I have a general idea of what I might encounter.In general terms what stands out the most is the character design, you can see that they were thought beforehand to make them more realistic but it remains to see the development they have regarding their actions and their ambitions.The writing quality is good, I can understand everything well although sometimes there are small words that could be changed for others, or rewrite sentences, to make the reading more fluid. But you can see the author's commitment to write something with quality. Good job!The world background has not been explained but some things are assumed in iceberg fashion. As the name suggests, "Urban Emperor". You know what might be there.Without further ado I will wait for other chapters to do another review, but I don't go away disappointed with another poor quality new work. It has the potential to be a lot of fun.I just hope for two things:Firstly that there is no nasty NTR towards the protagonist. I'll never understand masochistic horn-loving authors, but to each his own. I'll just leave with a bad taste in my mouth.Long live the Mary Sue MCs who take the beauties!And secondly, may the MC not be a freaking hypocrite. If he's evil let him behave like one. If he's a "nice guy" let him be as such, and even if he's a middle ground. To each his own nature in his actions. But I can't stand the implausible twists of hypocritical protagonists.
The story has been interesting, looking forward to what's to come!???????????????????????????????????????
I LOVE IT