Writing Quality is good but is over all presented in a awkward manner, Update Stability isn't set in a fixed state and is seem to be done on a whim as updates occur from 1 chapter every 3 days to 1 chapter every 20 days though I would like to add that they seem to be trying to get into a schedule of 1 every 3 days and it seems that they are either doing this for fun or improving their English (So don't bash them to hard). Story Development although unique is still very cliché and straight forward which can be good but only if done right but it still doesn't make it un-readable. Character Design seems to be done without much thought and there characters seem overly simplified and just seem to be slaves to the plot and don't have much thought of their own. World Background isn't explained much could be just because it's to early for them to introduce any of it or they just have no plans to introduce it at all but the author did take time to think of a power ranking system to be put in the world in the auxiliary volume so extra props for that. 3.6/5Overall Review: It's not great It has a comedic charm to it Writing Quality is decent. Update Stability is bad but seems to be improving. Story Develops in a predictable cliché way It's hard to find anything to appreciate about that. Character design other than the comedic charm (Which I'm not a fan of) is to put it bluntly pretty bad. World Background is by far the best as we see the author has taken the time to construct the 'levels' of the world.Note to the author: Thousands of people are reading your work so people obviously like your stories and my suggest is if you want to get better is to take your time with your work and I guess keep being you so you don't lose that charm. I'm just a idiot so you shouldn't take my words to seriously as I'm by no means qualified to give you advice this is just what I think about your novel.
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It had a confusing start and for me it only got more confusing. This novel has great potential it's not 'bad' it's just not to my certain tastes in a novel.
Simple message for everyone- Anyone who is looking for a ruthless, evil main character, you got this one. Not only is the MC savage but he is too ruthless. Takes revenge after being reincarnated.I'm waiting for more chapters.
Kinda stupid. Not sure why you would want the girl who hated him for something that’s not even his fault in his harem. He was a kid, and he was forced to do something, and she hated him for it. Lame.
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I haven't read that many things in my life, but this is one of the better ones, it reminds me a lot of solo leveling in the way that it's written. It might not be anything up and coming or be one of those ones where you must read it cause it's so good, but in my opinion I really enjoyed reading it, and am waiting for the next chapter.
Honestly is so great, but I didn't expect what's MC think right now. Like u know always be so thinking strategically and manipulating. If that's the case, I hope that MC acts more and dsn't talk a lot with his enemies or friend which's will make people think he's authoritative indirectly. Sorry if I've bad english, thanks.
An amazing novel with great potential. The author is doing a very good job and I hope he doesn’t drop it. A must read for sure.
OMGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! please update????????? im begging youuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO GOOD SO FAR AND I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!?please? :)
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