One of the better ones on webnovel. It's a mystery to me why is it that it's not that popular. So far, everything is 5stars. Keep up the good work, author!
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Read the raw to around chapter 50~ and it’s already very boring.Spoilers headSo that fallen angel chick he has enslaved is actually the daughter of Lucifer.His childhood friend turned out to be some super powerful war angel on more powerful then the seraphim.There was this goddess chick that destroyed a world willing became MC’s slave.His foster mother turned out to be some ancient super weapon designed to kill super god, a god that’s more powerful than the god of light and dark.There also this half dead angel whose sole fragments he absorbed became his master, which I strongly suspects would also join his harem at some point.At the point where I dropped the book MC is aready killing demon emperors.At Chapter 50~! And only a few years since he was born! So many coincidence in such a short amount of time crammed to tightly at a single point is this novels flaw.
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Love love love. This writing is so good. I recommend this book if you want to take your time enjoying a good story. The ML is so freaking hot. I feel like he loves the MC, and everyone else he might murder. I love when the MC bosses him around and the dangerous ML just takes it. Well, maybe he pokes back for fun. Great story. Keep going!
this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.
I love this book!From storytelling to character everything, is greatly woven .I have already read upto the current ch and I want more and more chapters .Hey guys, can anyone recommend me another book like this ?
His cheat is called "infinite enhancement". He gets a finite number of points, which he can use to upgrade an item a finite amount of times. Seriously, all he can do is upgrade stuff, and this is the only SSS rank talent ever? I'd call that S rank, at best.Also, he, despite being strong enough to fight on his own, and previously rejecting anyone wanting him to join, allows two girls to fight with him as harem members - oh, sorry, I mean, "support" people. And his giving them a bunch of enhanced items is totally logical.I mean I'm sure he would also help his male contemporaries if they didn't all turn out to be evil greedy thieving murderers.
The core of the novel is extremely solid, it is entertaining and immersive and it wants to be told. The characters seem lively and depicted well, it's a solid novel. Don't feel like you need to establish authors notes in the middle of a chapter though, as that breaks the immersion. Especially in something as important as a first paragraph which is huge for a novel. If a reader doesn't understand something, we'll ask. Then you can reply to a comment :) The other detractor that I see, which gets better over time in your chapters, is grammar and sentence structure. Every once in awhile it'll get away from you and pull the reader out of the story.I understand English isn't your first language, don't worry, it happens to those of us that have it as a first language all the time. but I do think it would be worth going back through and editing your early chapters (especially the first one as that's what is going to hook new readers) as your skill improves.You're definitely headed in the right direction! Keep up the good work.
The first 390 chapters were translated very well. But it looks like the original translator stopped and then another translator took over later. The new translator has changed the names of everything (sprites seem to have become elves) as well as having appalling spelling and grammar. Honestly chapters 391 onwards reads like it is machine translated and gives me a headache. Sad really as I liked this book.
I really like this work as a fan of the isekai genre. The MC's emotions are depicted in a believable manner and the relationship with his family is wholesome. it's a fun read that I highly recommend
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