five stars isn't enough for what i just read, I'm at chapter 8 and this book has been thrilling so far....Mr author was worried about his detailing, I'm sure you can improve but to me it's perfect. imagining those scenes in my head, I can hardly contain myself ??I just finished narrating this to my siblings and they're witnesses that this book is awesome ??more grease to Mr authors elbow ??
I’m suprise i thought this will novel will be harble but it’s one of best novel i have ever read will done ??
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Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
I have never been turned on while reading about death in my life! While Ronan is seeing death and Wren seeing life, I'm busy seeing sexual chemistry. Lord help me!!??This book managed to make me feel things I can quite comprehend. I haven't finished reading though but I can safely say, it's well-written, and everything is just amazing! The Mc's are sweethearts, I love them. I love the book. I love the author. I just love everything.
I can see why the first chapter could make people uncertain about continuing the novel.First chapter is a little awkward in the way it's done, but after that, it's pretty good, enough that you forget that first chapter.I feel like the pace is good and that it's interesting enough to keep reading.If I had one thing to improve, it would probably be the dialogue, but since I'm reviewing this early on, it's probably already fixed. Chapter one and chapter two is day and night, so chapter 70+ should be even better.
Damn, this sure gave me tense man. I feel sorry for reyhansh that he deal with his bad unlucky life.Anyway i hope rin would be reyansh's bf someday ??.I can't to read more
Only read a few chaps tbh but I like the story so far, it has a unique premise and I like the mc, I will keep on reading to know more about Aiden and his journey ahead. Good luck and keep up the good work author.
is this novel dropped? it's been 4 months last it was updated.
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Had potential. The concept was good but it was all ruined by the authors horrible grammar. Main characters iq is borderline 0, easily manipulated, vague character, has the memory of a rock, and his actions make no sense. Basically, the mc nobody likes. His parents really care about him to the point of aging 10 years in a day, yet the next day they let him marry some random girl because shes pretty, no opposition at all. Also he becomes a wuxia character that offends anyone because of a girl he just met, and goes and offends one of the biggest families there, all mid chapter. And then, since shes the boss of the house on her first day there, he has to sleep on the floor of his own room. Overall, a novel that could've been good.
I'm too stupid to understand your world , character design, background and situation of whole thing , your MC looks like yours not our , i can't be connected to YOUR stroy or MC or his circumstances .