YudhaKusuma2
30+ chapter for the moment is very good ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
‐------------------------------------------------------------------------@@@@@--A very good novel as it has civilization and having a god mc
I just typed a 300 word review and I accidentally deleted it?. I feel lazy to retype it so … this novel is great so go read it.
It is pretty good. the grammar is still readable. The MC is pretty normal not stupid and not smart. and this one is harem with Bro con. anyway its pretty good read
I like the ability so far and the story has great potential. I hope you don’t drop this author and keep up the work.
This book.....I'm short of words. Firstly, the words, the way he matched them together...oh no! You're great. The characters are also good. I love this book.... expecting more from you soon
Love it Love it Love it!I wanna read more about Lyle and what he does next!Keep it up author-san!I kinda suck at writing reviews, so this will have to do :P
It's a mess. It's a hodgepodge of ideas from different stories connected through the idea of a house mutating. Or a system connected to a house. By chapter 20 something, it's a system with personality novel and the house is sidelined as a resource. This story doesn't know what it wants to be.At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly.It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.
A unique and fantastic story set in a well thought out and creative world.
I like it but I give most stories five stars so mu review means literally nothing so meh? Anyways its kind of cool with a good plot and interesting characters keep it up I like it and will read.
As much as i like it, I really dislike the whole aspect of the mc being in a toddlers body for the majority of the story, its just a massive put off. I get the premise of it with him being a child of the empress and stuff, but i would of thoroughly enjoy it alot more he unlocked his memories of his past life when he got to a certain level of skill or power with magic. I have just never really enjoyed the whole genius baby thing, its a really over done concept with reincarnation novels. But all in all, i did enjoy it and keep up the work king!!
the author seems to have persecution complex towards other nationalities and is overly racist.the Nationalist themes sprawling all over and writing chapters specifically just to insult certain nationalities is frankly off putting.
