Definitely a must read ?.
Just three words "Oh my God!!" *I'm speechless* in a good way. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
I like the story and the way it is improving, the further developmentBut for me i could not understand why is the author making reading more complex, like he could have just said I am always thinking about him instead he goes on explaining poetically, becoz of it, it is only making harder to understand I don't know whether it is to increase the word cound odr whatever it may be but that is the only thing which I don't like about it
It's true about teenagers who fell into fake relationship and suffer a lot as and the adult should look forward to their life then teenagers should beware of it
Take dual cultuvation (the book). Give it a system. Gender bend the rules of sexism and make your mc a slightly mysoginistic crack cockain dealer. He is also smart, or everyone is just not so smart. Add some demons. Thats about it. Its entertaining enough, but its not the next best thing of web novel.
If you wanT To know truly my opinion then i will say author destroyed his good story. 1st of all can you clarify us that are you writing novel pr biography? when i read i don't get the feling of reading novel i feel i am reading a biography. and every character is behaving lije a robot. even though they are showing emotion i have to say i fell you didn't get depth of a character & the story is getting rushed. power system is also have a problem you can understand by going ch 8. & technic how they work you didn't say. you didn' t use system efficiently. lastly world background? there is none . which empire? who rule what? it might have at letter ch but sorry i got bored of reading same theme. but if you solve every problem then i can say this will be a greate story..
Outhor here i wrote a chapter the problem is idk how to upload it i need a code or somthing this is my first novel btw pls comment if you know im noob in this
totally garbage , makes no sense what is going on just mc doing stuff but even that's not understandable
Great story, with a pretty good writing quality. There aren't many grammatical errors in the writing from what I see. I'm interested in seeing how the mc will develop more as a character though. Sometimes he's just pure evil,which matches his past and later on, he starts to lose more of that caring side we see in the beginning. Hopefully we will see more of that later on. Anyways, I would recommend this story to those with an open mind and likes a good anti-hero because this mc doesn't give a damn and will sacrifice anyone, no matter the cost, in his rise to power. *Also he broke a seven-year-old's arm and killed the kid's family, early on in the story*.
Just like my other novels, I chose to bring back The Card Master System to this platform for free due to popular demand from readers. I plan on possibly continuing this novel series (Volumes 1+2 are already on here) but plan to do this only if this novel becomes popular on this platform. Otherwise, until my current novel Golden Dragon Merchant Group has taken priority while this novel is on temporary hiatus. I hope that you all enjoy this novel because it once had over 1.4 million views on here before I took it off and chose to reupload it.-OmniFrog
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When new Chapter ??Nice novel love the main charackter but thereshould Something happen with lucas amd ethan ( Like go training etc.)