it's good story the game that he created and the story about someone who play the game is good and was pretty immersive
The story is pretty good but the translation is letting it down a lot. The phrases and wording are especially jarring to read. I know I'm complaining but if you're gonna translate a book for people to pay to read, at least make an effort!
One Word- SystemTwo Words- Character DevelopmentThree Words- Strongest Offline SystemFour Words- Hardwork, Determination, and PassionFive Words- Fight against the entire world
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The beginning is kinda boring, it feels like to much explaining went into how the game works and the details of it. The chase scene was wonderful, though it felt like you wrote that first then realized you needed another opening, and the over explanation of the controls came. Other than that its creative, it definitely does have potential
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Brain Dead Mc to protect plot CheckStupid Coincidences to protect plot CheckPlot Armor CheckTo protect the stupidly designed plot, the author makes MC takes the most stupid decisions. It is one of the worst Chinese Web novels I have ever read. The "Original" structure is somehow interesting, other than that it is rubbish. I read 600 some chapters and I regret terribly. Author forgots what had he wrote in one chapter before, no flow, no cohesion. Fence Sitters are brain deader than the Mc. They talk rubbish to show Mc strong, cool and intersting, but in reality Mc is just that. Read with caution.
It is good and refreshing for a wuxia novel. The system is new and development pace is good too. The story is well balanced ................
This is an amazing book! The synopsos really suits the book! I relly like how you developed the characters in the first few chapters! There are things that you could potentially improve but other than that I think your book is great!
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace ?
Great novel, but i just started to read it and already i feel like im not in for a good time. The story itself is not bad. but i feel like every ally or abilities are stolen from any other manga or novel.However it's a great read if you don't mind about that fact.Will continue to read might change my idea.