ONE OF THE BEST FOR ME
I was excited at first after reading the description, but was instead shocked that this mc is fucking insane in the head, also pretty not smart.
so.... щ(゜ロ゜щ)
This is too sad. The story is very beautiful. It is heartwarming. It doesn't focus on only the fl, also their family. Although I feel the immortal part is being too random, it also feels fitting, lol. I love how the ml is broad minded. He knew what she needed the most—companionship. This is the perfect pre-quick transmigration story HAHAHAHAHA. I've felt the desolation, the sadness, the happiness, the sorrow, and the loneliness of the characters. Everyone is interesting, even the villain. I love this so much.
My heart aches
Uhhmmmm......okay I'm starting to get confused about the story, it was so good but all of a sudden the story change like what the f is going on
I swear it’s like every authour on here has some sort of pact where they need to make their mc a spinless coward when it come towards dealing with women I honestly dont get it. The story isn’t that bad well at least the starting chapter the whole tournement arc was meh. When you read something that says monster girl harem in the title and have an mc that proudly proclaim that he’s gonna make one in just the first couple sentences you have certain expectations and those have truly not been met. Idk maybe it gets better after chapter 40 (doubtful)
Writing quality is fairly easy to understand. It's above average for a webnovel, hence, the 3-star rating. However, it isn't exactly on the level of top novels here so that's that.
Story Development is fairly generic but hey, that's what we're all here for.
Now, Character Design. This is the one that made me drop and rate, for a very simple reason too. The author tried to make the mc a cringe japanese protagonist. Somehow, even when the girls are swooning over him, he assumes something outlandishly different. It's too stupid it isn't even funny, like, are his eyes fake? Surely, it would be pretty easy to judge if you're at least presentably looking no? But no, the author just had to crash down mc's iq to the negatives.
Updating stability, I didn't actually check.
World background, fairly average for an isekai plot.
Nice it's okay I just like your bookearly to get excited but reading is the best
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it's as if a ten year old child wrote this. there are a few things wrong with it but what really makes it unreadable to me is how delusional the author is. its unrealistic that a government would name a group of people with supernatural powers the "superhero association" or what ever it's called. I actually wasted some time reading it hoping it would get better but it didn't. I also assume that the balance of power is highly unbalanced considering only one percent don't have powers but the police can't take care of one criminal. who's only motive I know for causing chaos is because he is perhaps bored? cause he thinks that even though he isn't a world class power that he can seriously get away with it? that's simply unreasonable and unrealistic. this whole novel is probably trash if the rest is anything like the first few chapters.