Great story with some great laughs. the main character has a cute innocent charm about him. I love the supportive family but not sure what the main character love more though it is a hard pick between bananas or his family. the verdict is still out. come and let us join Michu adventure together.
I Love Volume 1 but Volume 2 just feels rushed but i hope other people can enjoy this novel. i loved reading it but i dont like volume 2, Volume 1 is 10/10 but Volume 2 is 4/10 for me
I really like the premise, I want to read it, it interests me a lot, but ...grammar is infumable, it is bad, it gives cancer, it cannot be read without consciously killing neurons, it is like mtl, but a little better, although it is not worth mentioning it is improvement, sincerely I would like to believe that it is a novel copied and pasted from the author and then start to edit it, but I can only qualify it with one, since I am unable to get past the middle of the first chapter, with how rubbish the grammar is.
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Amazing set up for a story i really like it especially hayami who is my favourite character. Its also an amazing action with its balance of fights and comedy
An enjoyable read since I love superheroes and I can't wait to read the other chapters. I personally would describe more and use less sound effects like the 'woosh' and all that. It had more of a comical effect and made me laugh when the mood and tone was serious. I know. I'm unique ???. It's just like a comic book without pictures. I'd love to read the comic if you make one. Then again really good.
*fixes his suit adjusting monocle* Welcome fellow daoists of reading... to another Ash review!! (I've lost count what number this is, but we'll just sneakily gloss over that fact). Ahem, this review should hopefully cover everything and give you the little push needed to read this book (don't let the low number of chaps fool you). I'm not so good with reviews, but I shall try my best! If not... well I offer myself to be eternally shamed and humiliated *internally sweats* Ahem, that said, let's jump in right away. Writing Quality: First off is writing quality... and you can immediately tell that the writing quality stands out from other novels on this platform. It's very, very high and one can tell the author knows what they're doing. Great! 5/5 Story development: I've read up to the latest chap: Chapter 23 (when this review was made) and I can say that the story has progressed quite nicely. I don't want to spoil anything really, but I will say that the prophecy in the beginning has caused quite a few conflicts and unfavourable situations, which is always a good sign when to us readers when reading.Very good. 5/5Updating Stability: The update stability is great! The author uploads a chap every single day, which is hard to do, so props to the author. If you're worried about lack of updates, then fret not because the author has shown they're very consistent. I do also wanna mention, that reading this has become part of my daily routine and I look forward to new chaps each and every single day. Excellent! 5/5Character Design: The MC's name is Jack and he is quite the character. The story is written in first person, so we get to look through his eyes and experience his daily life. Jack's personality is more of the subdued type, preferring books over fighting with a blade... however, that isn't to say his mouth isn't razor sharp when it needs to be. (He can easily win a battle of words.) Some of his statements have made smile and laugh. Next is the sidecharacters and they are well made with more depth being added to them the more we read. Particularly Jack's friends and siblings. Awesome... 5/5 World Background: Due to the point of the story where this review was made at, not much of the World has been revealed, however we are slowly finding out more and more with each chap. I'm excited to find out more! 5/5 (because what has been revealed is very interesting.) Finally, just want to leave a little appreciation message for the author: It takes courage to publish your work out into the world. I hope that more people will read the fruits of your labour and enjoy it. Thanks for writing! And thank you for gracing us with a chapter every day! :)P.s: I apologise in advance if the review is bad ?
Ridiculous. It's just a plain completely broken MC nothing more to say........... .........................................................
Very good, I'm looking forward to the next chapters140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit 140 character limit140 character limit 140 character limit
The characters are bland and at the end of every chapter is some dumb spoiler. N. N.
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