great read so far, looking forward to how it may develop
I was surprised by how well written these characters are. I usually look for slow burn, but this is a great approach! I love it! Their chemistry is amazing. Definitely a 5 star from me.
Nothing deep critics, i have enjoyed it. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooiooood. Goooooooooooood and Goooooooooiiiiiiokoooooooooooooooooooooooiioiiiioooooood
First off everything gets 5 stars. I've read everything released up to today at this time and I found little no to errors. (and I was looking). Updates are clearly stable seeing how many are out already. The story is great and the character design is perfect, I'd love to say more but no spoils from me. Read for yourself so you can get attached and feel the heartache I did. Lastly, world background is very typical for a system-based novel, but there was one change I've not seen before so it was new.All and all recommend 10/10 even though it's out of five but technically theirs a total of 25 stars for 25/25 read, why are you still reading this review. READ!
It's good ?. No cheats or systems just a slice of life cultivation novel without the slow build up.. . . .
Near chap 50 60 the story become unbelievable. The characters are weird, interaction weirder, everyone in this world is a arrogant - backstaber - young master - dumb grunt - idiot (chose some and mix them you have 99% of the character).And this make the story go bad. The idea of the shop is good but the story dev and charac dev are ruining it.Its honestly tiring to read again and again and again about Im X and Im gonna trash your shop. Oh no I get beaten. Lets call Y and he will trash your shop loop.Plus there is no law system at all it seems ? You can kill people and and be fine with that. Its a bit weird in modern settings, and it doesnt help with the story here because of the huge ammount of murderer/criminal in the world (all except the mc sister so far, so about 99.9%, even if we could say mc is kind of justified)The writing is average. Not bad, not exceptional.Anyways im disapointed in the story. I can t keep reading it.
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Negative Girls: To Live and Die is an amazing novel, with comedic aspects behind it. Horror is definitely crucial here, especially covering the dreadful topic of suicide. The writing style is amazing, perfect for fueling my mind to fabricate and print out images. Very well-detailed and the world building is amazing. There are many phrases that can be taken to the real world, and the topic of imperfection is amazing. Keep writing!
This novel has so much potential, but it ended abruptly. ? The author didn't let the me some find plot holes on the novel but, why did ended it too soon?! It literally left me hanging, though the ending is complete (no plot holes ). But, in the end it's too short. ???
This story is a consistency nightmare. Mc is generic unnaturally weak loser who becomes op due to cheat and then becomes a loner because of fear of jealousy. let's ignore all the team led by the barely adequate c ranks working hard to survive and having people. Revealing your power will absolutely cause isolation and not dependency. it's not like being a loner is always the source of bullying.This has a game system a as powerlevels and strict time limits. However it does not explain what those numbers mean at all and fails hard at keeping track of them. he also has a growth ability with assaingable points he never seems to assign. ten points in everything let's him effortlessly body the basic monsters. however when he fights a monster with almost double the strength it has he can't go heads up or make telling wounds? he also sleeps in the wild despite the novice zones being talked up which is terrible narratively. finally he has ten days to level ten to not die but he's only level one on the fourth day where dudes in groups are level three two days ago.
I really don't know how your brain spat out such a simple but yet deep story, but I'm loving it...I'm a fast reader, so it did not take me time at all to finish it, and now the hunger is killing me...