GatchaJoe
Is it done with 357 chapters? Need to read new ones...........................................................................................................................................
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
Improved and less racist version of im really a super star featuring more understandable comedy and entertainment. A worthy spiritual succesor that seem to do everything right
I want chabtar 6 .7.8.9.10..........plases ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
well another trash from a Chinese mfker...Don't read if you value you consciousness...well there are many suckers who do whatever...anyway from my opinion don't read it...you'll regret it...
Hi author DhaRylLoner I just want to say that your story Once Upon A Mistake is not just a novel. It will nice if webnovel will make a film adaptation on this story. It is so awesome story! I would like to read it again and again. I am still waiting for the book 2 by the way. Hehe that's all and thank you for the very awesome story!
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A good story, that *actually* feels like a proper novel. The system also isn't randomly provided for no reason, but is something the original owner of the body already had, through a family heirloom (likely the product of an evil god). The world background is interesting, with a 'church' that is fundamentally anti-theist. It's also not the kind of novel where all the women are thirsting for the MC (particularly because he's 10 right now) - the playboy is his mentor. The constant refrain of 'little boy' is a bit annoying though - you couldn't translate that differently? Anyway, so far it's solid, definitely better than most novels posted on this site. Hope it gets picked.
I usually do not write reviews but this book is the worst on video game genre I have ever read.This Author really sucks in telling stories.You do all the things that would prevent anyone from completing this ?Novel.????
I'm not gonna say that this is a masterpiece but it's definitively deserve some love, i think most people just get discourages at the begining relationship that the mc have, but it get better and a lot of peolple gonna miss some of the most heartwarming relationship that i ever read wich is a shame
This book hasn't been updated in the past 2 months. The last chapter that came out is 289...which feel pretty short compared to the usual chinese books. I really don't get what's the point of translating it.
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