Great... I like the premise of the book so far. The author has the knowledge and understanding of his world. At first it was somewhat confusing, but as the I read ahead it became better and better. Story development is great and invited me to read the next chapters one after the other. The MC although he acts foolishly in the start, it shows the realness of the MC personality. Overall, this story has potential and is highly recommended for those looking for an engaging book to read.
Only 14 chapters so far but it has already gotten me hooked. The story is a bit slow-paced, but honestly, I think it's worth getting through as it allows for steady character and world-building and as a result, the author is painting us a much better picture of the world they've envisioned.
TLDR: AMAZING, must read. Hope it stays this good.As mentioned previously by a different reviewer; a plant MC and Kingdom building is definitely a huge win. Not to mention the uniqueness of the story, even if not all that different from other system novels, makes it a great read. Although there are only 22 chapters, at the time of this review, and not enough time has passed for us to learn about the world background or new chapter speed, this is definitely going to become one of my favorite novels.The only cons of the story, so far, would have to be the occasional grammar mishap or the brain f**k when the author mixes a few words up. 10/10
Reviewing a flawed gem is never a fun process. On the one hand, you see potential in the work and you don't want to discourage the author from continuing their art, on the other hand, because you see the work has potential, you want to see that potential manifest and not remain in the realm of "what it could be" as opposed to "what it is". So I'll give my honest review, hope for the best and let the chips fall where they will.I'll start with the good, two stars and a wish as the teachers say... I mean they didn't say that in my day, but that's neither here nor there. The premise is interesting. It's very promising, a battle royale conducted by a snarky superbeing? What's not to be excited about?Furthermore, both main characters, Ashton and Matt are likeable. I enjoy the dynamic of their relationship.So that's the two stars, I might have more than one wish, but they all relate to the same thing, and that's the writing quality and style. The grammar is appalling, I mean truly appalling. But for my mind reconstructing sentences as I read, large sections would be unreadable. The novel shifts between past and present tense, and words necessary to make sense of certain sentences are just absent. As for the writing style. It's best described as simple, that's not a bad thing, it aids in understanding, but it's often so simple that certain sections come off as a little immature. Some of the dialogue comes off that way too, it breaks engagement with the narrative when every so often I have to stop and think "No person, reasonable or unreasonable would say something like this or do something like this."And then there are the descriptions. Descriptions aren't a bad thing, but you can go too far with them. The reader doesn't need to know everything about a character or a monster right off the bat. Details can be doled out on an as-needed basis. Front-loading so many details is really quite distracting.Overall, this webnovel is fun, the characters are charming and the premise is hooking, but it's majorly let down by the quality of the writing. Time spent in editing, reviewing everything from syntax to grammar to dialogue to word choices, would really move this webnovel from a middle of the road (for this platform) time killer, to a book people would be eager and willing to wait for.
CRAZY go read the novel right now there are only 1-8 volumes but the author already released 9 and 10 volume; AND GO BUY THE COVER ITS FIRE so cool
Its an amazing story and the idea is very good, but the grammar, punctuation, spelling is horrible, i could barely read it and it decreases the overall enjoyment of the story
This book can be judged by its first chapter (or a lot more chapters), but no less. Therefore, read the first chapter and ask yourself, should I continue this amazing book, or should I continue this inspiring book ?.
Decent if generic story about system weak to strong transmigrating alchemist. The r18 stuff is very random and forced for no real reason so far. Hands down the worst and only really unforgivable part is the fact that the author doesnt know how numbers work. In one sentence the mc has barely 10k gold and then in the next hes sellin something that he made for 100 gold for 100 million gold. Country and world population bounces all over too i think its a language thing but he needs to fix it cuz hes off by like 5 decimal places repeatedly
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The book is amazing. Words are chosen so well by the writer. Definitely a treat for the readers. The twist and turn of the plot is interesting and the suspense is what makes it more special.I highly recommend everyone to read this novel.