May more readers find this gem!
This is my initial review to show my support for you until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end!
I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
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Hi! This is my first time writing, and since no one gave a review, I would like to be the first. xD I will give my novel a five-star review because that's the hope I have for it.I believe the world background and story development Are and Will continue to be good, but like everything else, they can be even better. (like better expressions, new ideas.. and, as I don't have much experience, it may lack in those.)But, I hope that by the end, I will know how to write a better novel, So, I ask everyone to tell me where I can improve to become a better writer. Peace!
Hmmm...Nicely done, I must say. I like the fact that although I know who the mc is, the story is written from different perspective the entire time, without actually mentioning who the mc is.XDAlso, no glaring grammatical errors, with a good background of the world, and very well-expressed character personalities.