This bullshit turns into average cultivation story in 3rd world, the author even change the background story in ch. 660+ i didn't know if this just an arc or a complete background change but meh I'm gonna drop this shit
Entertaining read, the plot is a bit too good to be true, you get second change directly without have to be responsible for your early mistake, humm...But anyway, overall an enjoyable sweet lovely reading.
It was 10 years old in pokemon. Still, it dont make much diffence. Its like one day, your parents give you a little backpack and told you to go away where ever you want and a suspicious old man give you a fire breathing lizard and told you to catch a ton of dangerous monsters to fill up his monster dictionary that he doesnt even bother to fill himself. ( a.k.a free child labor ) and the parents was okay with it.
I had a lot of fun reading this story! It’s darker than most light novels on here, but the writing is…really freaking good…chillingly, almost-like crazy good. Characters seems really interesting, I’m excited to feed more into this sexi plot and already am excited for endgame, also shipping Sebastian x Andrew off bat. 8.9/10.
Author hear. Some of my inspiration on this novel is I wanted a grow a powerful character from the beginning starting with a strong foundation. A character we can see mature throughout the series
Hey readers, author here! Just wanted ya'll to note that this is my first time writing a novel and if you see some mistakes here and there please help me note them. By the way, English is not my first language but I think I am doing my best so far.
mc has no brain. He killed 22 lvl people, they will investigate how he got so strong in 3 days. mc sent himself to the experiment table on purpose. mc is stupid. mc never develops his intelligence. mc can't be low profile. mc has no brain. mc doesn't act logically. The cheat is on the wrong person.
Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars)Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars)Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars)World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars)Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars)Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.
Is this story dropped because it’s good and I like that he isn’t rushing the progress but there’s no updates for a year now and would love for it to continue
Beautifully written, the character growth is nice and subtle over the chapters. This is a slow burn, but it allows you to get to know and love the characters. The character designs are great! I wish this story updated more, and I can't wait for the future chapters. Definitely recommend.
So here's my review after reading Ch 45 of this novel. So basically the MC is overpowered, and he has almost the entirety of his power from the time he awakens(from what's shown until now). The story is based in present but would show flashbacks to tell us reasons for certain actions. I doubt we'll know anything concrete about the MC's backstory until Ch150 or so. So, I will read it after the chapters pile up. I would recommend this story if you like overpowered characters like "Anos" from "Misfit of the Demon King Academy". Keep up the good work author
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