I'm going to be honest as ever, as I would expect everyone else, who isn't a bot, to do the same. The story isn't good, but it's not bad. The grammar isn't good, sometimes you don't even know who's talking. You also have numerous sentences inside a quote without a break. I'm not a professional neither is many people. But I know those who are giving five stars saying it's the best novel they've ever read is straight up lying. I don't know if you've run this over with a grammar checker or use the money you get and get an editor; But the grammar and the story telling is off. I'm not trying to be harsh here. I believe this could be an insanely decent story (Although I'm not a fan of girls in covers for a story that has nothing to do with them) ; Clickbaiting etc (I dislike it,) but this story has a chance to be decent. Why not look at the reviews, ask people what can be done. That is what this is here for!
I loved reading it before as he tried to remain low key and didn't go into troubles... but then he started saving people, do that save slaves and its fking frustrating to see the character you like change into a fking cliche hero character... sorry i dropped this due to this
The potential of the story is really good, I have been wanting to read something like this for some time already. And the way the MC is I can’t wait to see more situations in the plot
I was amazed by the story-telling, let alone the believable dialogue between the characters. Some of the scenes made me choke on some food, but maybe I can get past it if it doesn't get too disturbing.. haha...
For the moment (Chapter 4) I find the beginning of the story very good, I can't wait to read the rest. So good luck and continue your good work author-san (Sorry for the mistakes, review written in French translated with goolge translation)
If you have checked any other work of this author, you would know this is yet another amazing work!Give it a shot, I am sure you will not regret reading it!The writing quality is top-notch, and the story makes you want to keep turning the pages!
Firstly the plot and the idea is very interesting. However, by reading around 20 chapters I still find the novel boring. Everything is too confusing and not explained properly, moreover, some things are too unnecessary descriptive. Overal while reading this novel I am 'always' asking the question wtf is happening? I don't know...I don't enjoy it right now, tedious perhaps? Anyway, when there are 100 chapters Ill come back and see if it gets better.
could be good novel. Sadly author managed to make it worse than xianxias shit. boring af. stupid af. world building.... just bland, boring. mc is kinda meh
Alright since the novel will hit 100 chapters soon, this is a good time to clear up some things for new readers. Firstly the romance bit of this story doesn't start until a very long time, hell even in the current chapters ( Chapter 98 right now ) it still hasn't started. I didn't want the story to revolve around the romance until at least the end of the prologue arcs, because yes the first four arcs are really just prologue arcs. A lot of things happened but it's not the actual story yet. I know 100 chapters of prologue seems long, but stuff do happen so it's not like 100 chapters of just nothing. It's 100 chapters of worldbuilding, characters presentation and a bit of developpement. I think many will consider that the true story already started, but I am being hard with my own story and consider that the four first arcs are really bad compared to what is coming. Also I wanted to, as I already said, clear some things up. The MC is not a good person overall, he may seem like one but he really ain't. Imagine as a villain who still has a heart and didn't lose all of his humanity. Also the MC is not the only important character in this story, it focuses on a lot of other characters and everyone who is named in the story can become immensely important later on. To finish this I'll say that if you're looking for a basic cultivation story, don't read this. I don't know what my readers think of it, but I personally feel like my novel doesn't have a great cultivation part and only takes some ideas from other eastern fantasy novels. the cultivation part to me is bad, the other parts should be good. But if you want face slapping young masters, hiding your power to shock everyone repeatedly and long paragraphs to describe how the mc is cultivating...This ain't the good place.
Read to chapter 39This isn't a player turns NPC into a game novel.The MC is transported into a fantasy world where he has a system based on a social browser game and that he only bought the starter pack for.He has to level up his base (Elemental Tower), summon heroes (like Dra), and build up an army of mob soldiers (Elemental Summons).As long as you've played a game that requires you to train armies and summon heroes you can pretty much understand the gist of the novel, I've only read one translation similar to this called My Doomsday City(or Fortress?) and I'm a fan of these type of novels.Overall I like it. ?? [My Doomsday City(Fortress?) doesn't have many chapters translated btw]
Didn't they already post this like 7 times already………?I'd recommend staying away from this if you value your time and brain cells.After reading this I've become dumberer.
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