Dables
After 10 years of training they had gotten stronger, but not enough to defeat the gorilla that Way defeated 10 years ago.
Reviewing for the sake of Free FP keep up the good work.
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Brain dead mc. Simp. low iq. Equivalent of a twelve year old with mental issues. Hypocritical to a fault. Contradicts himself. the list goes on. Overall he's a trashy character. He was bullied so what do you expect, all these so called bully victims who don't help themselves or at least try to are worse than their bullies and the people who watch and do nothing. What should one expect from someone with the strength of character to not help himself and wants everything on a diamond plate. He's trash, story is trash, everything is trash. It has some good points but ....the mc ruins it all.
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.
Sir i find i like your story and ask kindly to have said link to the comic.plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz pl plz plz plz plz plz plz I neeeeeed iiiittttttttttt
Absolutely awesome! It's a good novel, can't wait for a mass release... I hope there is one???????????????????????????????????????????
Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
From now on i'm writing the novel slower because i've seen my quality of my work it sucks balls.................................!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Even though it has not released many chapters so far I'm really liking it so I hope you could continue it. Can see this turning into a "GEM"
