Just caught up with the translations ch.(1120) so here is my review for those who are interested.1)This thing was almost enough for me to drop this novel. Here is why.From being a poor boy to becoming one of the richest and most influential man in whole of China, people in high government positions try to blackmail/frame/kill our MC with any means necessary (including trying to kill his loved ones), but the MC still is a hardcore nationalist saying things along this line "After i die i will donate my body to the country". or "It doesnt matter if i die, at least i contributed to my country while i was alive". Meanwhile he has 4 wives, and his family, but the only thing on his mind when he is faced with his death is his love for his country. **Allow me to vomit for a sec.**2)Nationalism-Racism. Author is quite cunning about this point compared to other CN. Because in this novel the author makes every other country apart from china seem to be full or racists. So when a conflict erupts Chinese are the "good guys". But he could not hide the fact that he is actually a racist, from my tranxending vision! So you should expect some Chinese bullshit that really makes you cringe. At some points i really wanted to vomit from what i read.3) MC has 998 IQ. You heard that right. Us normal people have 100, 180 makes you Einstein, but our MC has 998. Still the decision making progress of our MC makes him seem like a kindergarden education lvl. There exists no logic in our MC's actions from a certain point in the novel.4) The MC is the white knight-hero type but at some points the author seems to forget that, so the MC pretty much kills and destroys who knows how many families, and then he returns to be the hero type again. *VOMITS* How shameless can one person be?5)Harem. Dont get me wrong i love harem. But in this novel it is too much forced. Basically, every woman can make our MC her bitch by shedding a few tears. Thats who our MC is when it comes to women. A fucking pussy.**Concluding, Despite all the bullshit the author writes in the novel, it was still somewhat enjoyable or else i wouldnt read until 1120. Since i actually drop novels very easily if they are boring. Now if you can somehow ignore every bullshit i mentioned above, you can give this novel a try. It still has some good qualitys.
please where are the chapters from 69 to 298
I really love all the charactersssss
Does the author still update this novel or dropped? Planning to add this on my library kasi.
Tu Wa Zi one of the kids will make you wanna drop this novel because of his character, it’s trash not trash that you can understand and go with but just absolute garbage
it was great, it was slow but worth it, so just read it.
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Your style is really inspiring. The way story is started seems interesting and unique from others. It's sad to hear about his parent's death as this factor will affect his life. Really interesting concept.
I liked the story if it weren't for the sister thing then I'd probably check it out on Patreon. wish you luck but nope the taboo put me off this. the MC's ideas and how attitude besides the taboo is something I like plus his "character" traits.
I like it. It's pretty similar to The Novel's Extra and The Author's POV. Anyone who's read either can pretty much predict where the story is going to go, which isn't necessarily bad. I can't really say much when it comes to the world and characters because the novel is newer and there aren't a lot of chapters. Character development is really what makes these kinds of stories stand out from the rest; when storylines are similar, it's the characters that determine if the novel is good or bad. Both the world and the characters have room to grow.What really hurts this is the grammar. It's legible, and that's about it. Most of the people on Webnovel probably aren't real strict about grammar, but it's also clear where good grammar is what determines which novels people keep reading and which ones are dropped. A few things I'd like to point out: Run each chapter through Grammarly. The free version works very well. It's a great way to improve grammar.Periods go inside of quotes. I noticed this a lot in Ch. 17. It should be: "Blah blah blah." instead of "blah blah blah". The same rule is true for commas. A lot of the sentences are broken; it feels like words are missing.Finally, use commas. I see a lack of commas in a lot of novels. It's more of an experience thing, deciding where to place them, but reading well-written works helps with figuring out where to place them. I was taught to read each sentence out loud, and to put a comma where I naturally paused. Overall though, it's a good story with potential, worth a try if you like this kind of novel.
Loving this novel already! Keep up the good writing author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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