Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
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I am more into mature or let's just say older novel contents. I passed the age of reading high school novels, but I would say, you're doing a good job author. There are some grammatical errors here and there (not obvious though, so it's fine), some spelling mistake as well, but the way the story slowly progresses, is like it. The challenges and management skills of the ML is superb. I give two and half thumbs up for you.
The writing style is good as well as the character development. The male lead has an air of arragance and haughtiness. I am waiting to see how his character develops in the upcoming chapters. I hope to see an improvement in him.
Hello Author-San, passing by here to give my support to your novel, I really like the idea of telling a little about the past of the world, the empires and kingdoms and all these things that happened in our human lives, I would like to give a tip / request if possible and it’s not a lot of work, do a separate chapter to explain this period a little to people who are not from this region, (I’m Brazilian) so I don’t know much about this part of the world unfortunately, but so far I really like yours story, keep it up!(google translate)
It is just amazing. The way you use the words, it makes you FEEL the meaning not only understand it. Keep going because I would for sure wait for more!??
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a bad MTL after the second volume, the first was ok but the second there are he/she changes, repeat on words and error in formatting