expendable9325
I like it, the start isn't the best but it gets better.......................................................................................
This novel immediately pulls you in and makes you excited to learn more. The world and characters are well established and easy to follow along with. The story flows great and is a great mix of adventure and humor. I dont typically like 1st person POV stories, but it really works for this novel! Excited to see how it plays out!
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It is a nice realistic fictional story and I loved it so far. I hope the author won't disappoint her readers and will keep updating. Enjoying your words author!
Stopped after 10 chapters, way too much misplaced comedy and incoherences, that pulled me out of the story.
There's only 1200 pioneers in the world which I assume has a 7 billion population which makes the chance of being one 1 out of 6 million and of course there's 4 of them being in the same school.
It's also not explained why monsters would appear before the terraformation, whether they'd appear for everyone,...
After getting these powers and the terraformation, you really get the feeling these guys are in a summer camp. Millions of people may die but all they think above is mocking each others and playing jokes.
There's also the convenient fact that you have 2 sons of mma champions, a champion archer and a kid from an assassin family all in the same school...
Too much for me to believe it'd be genuinely possible if such event were to be happening. It's a sloppy beginning.
The story is awesome and very relatable for our age. I hope there will be more character development. Will definitely recommend to others who like the same genre.
Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember. Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try
I like the vibes of this story xd ?Btw can you tell me what is the realm/level in our MC is isekai world? And how strong each realm/level is?And hope to see oyakodon with his aunt and cousin ?All right that is all hope you will never drop this novel see ya!!!!
Has this been dropped hopefully not Cuz i really injoyed this
a new premise/idea to me and it's very interesting, I'm not too picky but I don't find any major flaws and say this could be the rising of an amazing novel
Bits and pieces of various other novels badly pieced together. Not an ounce of originality. There must be hundreds of beast taming novels on this site by now, yet the protagonists always have the same few pets. I only read a few chapters and there are already so many red flags.The story takes place a mere 17 years after a literal apocalypse, yet we have a fully functioning society with advanced knowledge on spiritual energy (which is new) and genetic technology. I can guarantee that later in the story we’ll have a whole bunch of old masters and old experts full of knowledge on beasts as if they had been learning the stuff their whole lives and not the same amount of time as literally anyone else who’s at least in their twenties.The protagonist died because he killed a mosquito, which is a big no-no because mosquitoes are now super poisonous and if you touch them you die; yet later we learn that in his previous life the protagonist was a member of a beastmaster’s entourage and he was the team’s survival expert… the beastmaster was naturally a female beastmaster and died, I’m sure in this new life he’ll get the chance to save the jade beauty and add her to his collection.His first pet is a bear… so unoriginal it hurts. At some point I’m sure he’ll get a green caterpillar and the usual dragon or phoenix.He lived a pathetic life and by the time he died 10 years later, he never even managed to gather enough money to buy the awakening potion. Despite that he has tons of convenient knowledge he should not have had acess to, considering he should have been busy trying to survive at the bottom of society.All in all i’d say read it only if you’re new to Webnovel or the genre.
It's a very cliche story, nothing original or interesting, with writing that's hard to understand and pretty lazy. I feel like it's going for comedy but missing by a mile. Plus the cover art seems to be stolen.
