everything was good then his friend appeared and I dropped it
Well, I've read up to chapter 40. I want to ask if he actually sacrificed his sister or not because I find it illogical that he would be reincarnated and then oh, I will sacrifice my sister to gain power. I will leave the novel if he actually sacrifices her, so tell me.
actually I liked the plot and so much thought process which makes story sometimes unable to be understood (I just skipped those parts) but sometimes whenever someone adds Multiversal plots , the story starts to leave bland taste sometimes I think that they don't even understand how Multiversal concept works. if they just wanted to make multicivilisational concept, they should have just used galaxies. Multiverse means different laws, no being can remain conscious outside laws. well I'm not outright telling them wrong, but it still feel like you're calling cat 'a dog' from my point of view that's all. well anyone who have opinion on this doesn't need to tell me because it is just a review, no need to become serious. if author wants he can take notes or just forget it.
Terrible grammar. Storyline is mediocre. No character development. Absolutely no world building. Would not recommend anyone to read until author finds an editor and learns to write.
Hmm nicd story but you should start learning how to translate it in english better. As you can see you're novel is really good and have a potential. Only the translation is really a little unbearable to read. But still the story is good keep up.
if I could give it less, I would. The damning nationalism is rather disgusting and extremely off putting. I understand that authors are often forced to put in nationalism as a way to placate their dictatorship but I recommend that they try to limit it as much as they can.
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hey author do you mind actually writing on your old books because I'm sure people are getting tired of buying advanced chapters ( for such a large price) only for you to stop updating your novels thanks
Great job author-san! I have been reading and I just can't get enough I have a feeling it will turn darker and my my, what obsession do I have with darkness, This book is going straight to my reading list.
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