[1] The Bloodlines don't actually fill the Heritage. What I mean is that depending on the amount of blood they have, if the Elven Bloodline isn't 50% or higher of the total blood than it is not the dominant Bloodline.
'Hey Mel! It's me, the coolest guy you've ever met! Wake the f*** up, man!' (Chai)
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Genuinely surprised at how good this story is and how the tropes are being altered differently than expected. Pleasantly surprised and really enjoying the story. The writing and grammar needs a bit of work in some places as ocassionally the author Mia-genders a character by using he or her instead of the correct pronoun when talking about another character during the internal monologues or narration. Some other moments where word choice is a bit unnatural or missing a filler word to not have a broken sentence. Even with that, it’s mostly a fairly great story and those mistakes are uncommon. Maybe once a chapter or so, so it’s not too overly distracting. 64 chapters in and really enjoying it. We’ll see in the remaining 250+ chapters how things end up but I recommend it.
Hello author,Am just a daiost, can you release 3 chapters a day instead of 2 chapters a day, I can't handle the Cliffhnangers
This was so goodkeep it up ?more of it
Slow Update Like Very Very Very Slow Update
I have no idea what's happening, I'm not sure if it's the translation or it's just bad.
Nice work author, really love your plot and the way you describe your characters, really love the drama can’t wait to read more of your work good job. Nice work
*Remember: this review is based on the first five chapters.*Constructive Criticism: I'd suggest that with your constant scene changes you make sure that when the focus character changes, that you state who the focus character is... I got a little confused with the only thing to go on being the time the events were taking place.;,;.Positive Feedback: You seem like some sort of professional writer with the quality of the plot, character build, and background. Also, your grammar and structure are well done.;,;.Personal Feedback: I did as promised and read this novel to review it. I'm sorry but the story holds no interest to me so I'm discontinuing it here... Keep up the effort and satisfy the fans you have the best you can.;,;.
The author is able to set up the world quickly alongside with establishing who is the MC and what they are like. I personally couldn't any grammar mistake so there isn't choppy sentences or any frustration when reading.
I like the Mc. How he's not so typical. Like usually they are mostly dumb or not just the brightest and have to rely on side characters more often. I like that there isnt any unnecessary harem but a little romance wouldn't hurt either. The Mc name is also good. Reminds of me of a red haired guy from an anime