Pedophil1a warning
Really bad ped0philia towards a newborn regardless if they saw his future self
Was alright in the begining but after the female chars it went down hill fast
There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power.
I haven’t read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isn’t fully developed. A lot of things aren’t really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color.
I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly don’t. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big butt… literally all of them and given the same body description.
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If you read this you will get frustrated because of how DUMB the mc is its agonizing how he knows the modern cultivators are weak and suddently because of one phenomenon that coincidentaly happened after he cultivated it makes every old man an expert(to his mind) and he ignores the system he dosent use it
This week's trial read is becoming better and better in almost every aspect. I am very much intrigued by the flow of this novel; it is not that unique, but it has this sort of air that pulls readers to be trapped within and not escape anyhow. This is an excellent start for a beautiful read.
this novel is op like to read more when will new ch be arriving waiting for them .. . .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .
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Don’t mind me, just a shameless first stealer giving a 5-star review. If your read the book, you’ll understand why I gave it 5-stars, and if you look at the chapter comments, you’ll understand why I’m a first stealer.
Honestly I was reall liking the book for the first 12 chapters but after that the story became really rushed and opened up a lot of plot holes in the story. It is really sad to see that happen to a novel that intrigued me.
This book got me hooked, from a good plot to accuracy of words and interesting characters which are amazing. Good job to the author.........