i somewhat liked it till 70th chapter, as mcs power was kinda cucked and weakened by plot and explanations. mcs previous pets being 'frozen' and leaving him without anything was meh as well.
The start is quite compelling. The novel begins in medias res, so you're thrown into the litrpg world right away. Skills, levels and stats occurr from the very beginning. The first narrative arch is mainly about Helial and his little sister Lumia.Things liven up soon enough. As the first adventures unfold, you immediately grow fonder of the main characters.I would recommend this novel for its enthralling plot. The flashbacks and the humor are the strong points. (Lasagna for president).The only weakness are the secondary characters in the second narrative arch (as well as Vidio in the first one). It's not like they're not well-written, I just personally didn't appreciate them much. Maybe it's just the main character who outshines them
5* TQ5*SoU4* SD5*CD3*WBThis novel honestly intrigues me and I hope it gets picked, as in my opinion it's the best out of this back of trial reads that came out this Friday. That being said, this novel is not amazing from what I've read so far. To be honest though my opinion is quite flawed as I have only read up to chapter 40 and from that I can't judge too hardly.But the reason which I don't find this book amazing is due to the world background, I mean I literally understand nothing. Not only in terms of world knowledge but power knowledge as well. All I know is that the Mc is strong as he has rank 9 skills, how does that translate overall I don't know.I'm extremely confused and for that reason I gave WB a low rating, if in future chapters they explain this more clearly in a more organised way while maintaining the level fo everything else this could be a fantastic novel.
First, they should fix the character name in the blurb. Secondly, it's fairly different than the other Simulation novels. Instead of simulating the future in text, or making the MC live in a phantom world, this one lets the MC be multiple sidekicks of a VIP in their past. Kind of like being Alfred for a few years before Bruce Wayne becomes Batman, then switching to Robin's perspective, then Catwoman. MC just sees text of male or female sidekicks view of their lives, then gets rewards later.The world doesn't seem very deep, but the simulator is the most complex one I've seen yet. Maybe to keep it from being overpowered like some other novels.
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Se ve bien.La historia tiene potencial.No puedo esperar para leer más.?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????
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Your story Backgound is interesting but it was not really writen much after the intro and i fand this the best part of your story.Writing quality is bad, you can read the story but to many gramar fault but the greteatst BS is your characters in the story. To many bad cliches. lack of consistency and logic, when i have read the story i was thinking are all persons in the game idiots or 5 year old children?
Some chapters after the 40th suddenly the quality of the translation goes down like crazy. If there is one sentence where the gender is used correctly you feel lucky.It is not just he/she, someone is suddenly even an "it". This is a new low.
Boring Trash cringe after the girl came......??????????????????????????????????????????????????????