This novel has good grammar and an interesting plot that is developing nicely. So far, it is a pleasant read and it's quite easy to understand. Well done!
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READ IT GUYS! Read it to know the worth of the story, a very interesting and exciting System trope novel. The gaming Characters and Story plot is just great. It takes a lot of chapters for me to be hooked with the story, but this book completely made me hooked by just the first chapter.
I have 3 questions and I wondered if you could be kind and answer them.1. Will there be any racism or human supremacy? The Mc thinking that humans are a superior race or that he wants to save humanity. Humans looking down on other species. Humans actually having something that makes them special.2. Romance/harem3. Is there a lot of technology or mostly magic. (I prefer magic)
I first found this book when it was free for 24 hours. The first 5 chapters were pretty ok, they were introducing the character and the system, as well as some details about the world. It also highlighted the beginning of his adventure towards power, his goals and motivations, which was great. It starts going down hill when he meets the boar orc, the second rare grade creature. At one point in the story it says that ordinary objects can't harm these beast and then he ends up killing the monster with a tree. I also have to mention that the fight scenes are pretty poorly described, I'm never able to get a picture of what's going on, I was only able to glean that he fought, got somewhat hurt and in the end somehow killed it with a tree. There are also some parts that I find really ridiculous, like when for some reason he feels the need to con someone who cared about him or the fact that a character just blurts out all his thoughts and worries to someone he deems a stranger. In reality people don't just blurt out the whole truth of their problems to others who they meet for the first time, at most they would give a vague outline of what's wrong. The character is also pretty dumb, at one point he goes on a tirade about how despicable others hiding information about their powers is, when he's also going to end up doing the exact same thing, it's kind of common sense to keep important information to yourself. Overall, the concept and beginning is good, it's just... everything else that's not great. Too many inconsistencies and nonsense.
By the way, there is MTL of this, just search it. I have glimpsed of this title but didn't read it yet. It's on the new or popular section.
author I love how u started to set up the characters and world and your take on this genre but you update this book way too little,and I realy think if u put the time into this book it could be a banger.so while u do have your first readers interested why dont u try(and i know writing is hard af) to update the book a little more pls???
Female lead? CheckFunny? CheckGrammatical errors? CheckMa- wait wait wait. its a check? nvm, we all got them, don't we?Great plot and storyline. Hoping for more.
Alright, shamelessly putting a 5 star review. If you liked my story, i hope that you will review it and add to your library. This is my first story, and i know it has flaws.I have planned for more chapters. Will write and post them periodically.Thank you.
Coming next: I am overpowered because I mop a house
great book. great job.love it. lots of fun
The story is initially intriguing, and no flaws were particularly obvious for at least 50 chapters or so. After that... well maybe the author had a sufficient following and got careless?
There are a number of instances that are tiresome but bearable; the almost obligatory "China #1" plugs, frequent contradictions in his descriptions of incidental motivations or consequences, the logical flaw in "completely conquered people are more loyal than allies" (until they believe they have a chance at rebelling, obviously).
What finally made me drop the book was the unfortunately common theme of "strong willed MC turns into putty in front of (in this case random) pretty women", which to me just speaks of shoddy character design.
Clearly the story is popular enough, but for the readers who want a consistent and cohesive narrative, I don't recommend.