This is good novel with fast paced, highly recommend..............,...,.....................................................................
Love the book, I am ready for more chapters at all times haha, I enjoy the writing and storylines
I always am looking for money making novels, so now it's here I can't wait for this to get chosen. I hope you guys will vote for this amazing novel.
After I finished reading the available chapters, I thought about the various aspects of the story such as characters and their interactions, the system and how it works with the MC, the events that occur, ect... I find that the story is rather bland. It is obviously written by someone who has some knowledge about the medical field, or even a lot of knowledge, but the story just does not excite me. Maybe it gets better, and I can only hope so, but it is not enough as is for me to recommend it.
i want to like this book but even after its completion the amount of spelling mistakes and just wrong words used consistently throughout the paragraphs that make you have to stop and consistently figure out what the author was trying to convey made the story unreadable for me. Otherwise, it's an interesting but unoriginal story as of Chapter 40. Maybe the writing quality gets better, but it's just too much of a chore as it is for me to read.
Hey yo! I'm not fond in reading nor watching a horror book but then it has thrill so fair enough that I did take a look at your wonderful creation! Ur book is great and highly recommend it to everyone! Lovelots, Cie-LbiTch(Ciieee<3)Ps: just work a little bit more on your spacing, punctuation and grammar. Don't be down, it's for the improvement and I went into the route before so, I wanna help u out???
Found this novel on FB and I just couldn’t put it down. The story is very intriguing and the story flows nicely. I like how the ML is always there for the FL when she’s in distress or in difficult situations. I hope this story has a happy ending for the both of them anfthey stay together.
What's the point of having a mate when all he does is protect your enemies while ruining you in the process & giving one of them what was your's. His dead beta should have been his mate. Anyone connected to him is Derek's #1 priority. There is no fixing this couple, even if he saves her later on.
Perfect story with good ending. I love every minute with this Eno family and Co. Thanks Author, you did justice to this wonderful piece. .........
I love her writing with all juicy and love and am waiting for Ezrah and Zora to be together
This book is too expensive author, 37coins...48coins and so on. Yet the fact remains, with all the grammatical errors to this book should not have been this expensive... It's okay to hike the price when you edit the book. For now it's too much... .........
The stakes in this section escalate so fast my head is spinning. It starts small — a dead plant, a worried eunuch, a hint of poison — and within three chapters people are DYING. The fake eunuch in the cave, the burly attacker in the forest. Both killed by teenagers who really didn't have a choice. What makes the tension work so well is that the author never lets you breathe. Captured → escape → injured → pursued → fight → more injury → rest → more emotional tension. The external conflict is clear: someone wants Xia Xiuyan dead or captured, and they have resources (messengers, multiple attackers, knowledge of the palace grounds). But the INTERNAL conflict is what hooks me — Qiu Xinran has never killed before and now she has. Xia Xiuyan has been living with poison and assassination attempts since birth and he's still standing. The question hanging over everything is WHO is behind this? The author drops just enough clues — Luoshuang, the foreign envoys, the mysterious contact arriving at dawn — to make you desperate for answers without giving anything away.