- "Hehe... well the plan was never to defeat the First Order's fleet..."- said FlameBeard with a frustrated laugh- "we'll follow your plan Admiral..."
Sabo turned to the robed figure behind him in shock and confusion.
Snow continued to fall from the sky yet, I can sense my whole face burning. I grabbed the handkerchief from his hands and wiped my face with it. I did not dare look at him, instead, I bowed and cursed inside my head. When I finished cleaning my face, I said my thanks and... almost returned his used handkerchief on the spot. I retracted my hands quick. I had caught sight of his face when I returned to my senses. It turned from black to red to his normal face colour.
A little cliche, but your writing style makes the story unique. The only challenge is the frequent changes in scenes and locations, which can be hard to follow sometimes. Adding a little bit of description whenever necessary would help. Otherwise, a potential story with good characters, especially Sebastian- I love his madness!?
This is a good read for cultivation fans, but for those who hate wuxia it's not recommended to read it, because it's useless to change the protagonist but the mc's behavior is still like China
great novel also it seems the mc stole the throne of imu sama
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Nice. Hope similar work keep coming. I hope author can complete the story as more suspense keep bubbling. Overall I think it is a good story.
Thanks for updating and I also like the development of the story the description of the story is also good the character is also describe nicely the difference of the world is also clear I also like most of the parts while reading I can imagine the situation and the character
Just Amazing. It's like I am the main character.Though the only reason the overall rating is 4.5 is because of the updates.Overall I say "Keep it up!"
Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1Goof Novel, keep updating author.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!1
This is a really an incredible story, written without any grammatical errors! This story speaks about the childhood life, nature and wild life. Also, this story is very adventurous!