This rating is for making me believe that this novel was an insane god tier novel catered to my preferences, to only then ruin it with racism. I understand that Qidian forces you to do this, but why do you have to break my heart like this? It's so hard to find apocalypse shelter type novels let alone GOOD apocalypse shelter type novels. I-I don't even know how to voice out how disappointed I am.
I have only read till chapter 22 but I can it is good novel ??.It has lot of potential.keep updating author-sanGood luck to your journey.
the setting and characters is gripping and addictive and very well written.But I'm a little disappointed that it's so short.but good work author
I tried to read this. I got up to chapter 20 before I couldn't do it any more. The ideas are interesting and has potential. But the writing... and inconsistencies.
It's nothing special, but I do enjoy reading it. The premise is basically that the MC gets a special blacksmithing flame that lets him take attributes from other weapons and ores to forge better gear.I'd have rated a little higher, but I am a little put-off by the fact that the mc doesn't seem to really struggle for most of what he has. His special flame was found through some amount of innate ability but good luck. He wins his competitions relying on his ability rather than hard-earned skill even though he is supposedly a good smith even without it, and there are a few other points into the story that just feel like he rolled well on some cosmic random number generator. I know most cultivation novels have that "Cheat" that the MC's get, but this one just leaves me with the feeling that he doesn't deserve it.Despite that, as I said, I do enjoy the story. The characters aren't as one-dimensional as they are in most Xianxia. There are a few too many people that faun over the MC, but everyone has a valid reason for doing what they do at the very least. Anyway, overall it's solid. Not without its flaws, but it's better than 80% of the garbage out there.
Amazing novel. perfect 5/5. Don't let the chapters not being named deter you from reading this amazing novel. It is a unique and really cool novel. Everything about it is amazing. I love the characters, the plot, and really love the unique world. The MC also has an amazing backstory to him. You need to be careful though to read the side chapters when your supposed to read them for the best experience.
Good character design MC is not a retard who does thing without thinking and the budhist refrences makes it even more interesting A solid book, better than most of the dog shit stories being picked lately
Good novel far.Though why bother picking a novel that has been dropped?word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count
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Although it begins in the best way and gives you hope in it, it ends up deseecting you as it progresses, it does not pay attention to the correct use of the powers of the protagonist (who even explains them and then forgets them) implies a plan for continue for the story that then goes through the eggs, the character does not evolve at any time, he is weak, fearful (he is terrified of heights, he is nervous, he is often ashamed, he shows too much his emotions, they can read his mind, etc; and that has the passive ability of the player's mind) and with delusions of greatness claiming to be a king when at the most and is a deku a little more serious. Prota's love affairs are good, Luna is a good wife for the protagonist, Tonks and Daphne. In short, it is a good story but you will be irritated by those errors as the plot progresses, especially if you read shadow hack and the farm before this story, personally I do not recommend it until I solve those minimal errors that give **** to this story that could be good among harry potter's isekai. In addition to the repeated paragraphs that all they do is confuse you.
And another potential awesome book from shadow the same, bravo, you have my utmost respect. This book is... is simply something else, I can't explain why your stories are able to drag me into them so easily. Just started and I already love how the potential character set up, the personalities are there well fleshed out, the background of the MC Nero is well done, we see his drive, his purpose, even the system is plain awesome, I love its simplicity yet well thought out route.The thing I like the most is Adult Nero, such a nice twist for reincarnation, rather than having the Old Man Spirit, or just takeover, haha, really unique!
I like some of the more abstract concepts this story throws at the reader, like betrayal, and there certainly is a cohesive theme, something that really ties the story together. I will give more feedback later, but I see no reason why this would not have potential after a little editing. Also - I really, really like action scenes like the ones in this story.