this was terrific there were a few storyline that would've been nice to further explore, but overall I would recommend this to others
it's awesome ............ the female yis cool
24 chapters 1-3-23
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I find it a really good novel, different from the rest, where the protagonist is a weapon. However, from my perspective, the true protagonist is Fran. It's a fantastic novel that had me eager to find out what happens next.
If you're in the mood for a quick read, this straightforward and concise tale is definitely worth checking out. There weren't any overly dramatic moments that detracted from the story. The author's choice to have the protagonist end up at the bottom of the system hierarchy was a clever touch, I must say. (✿◡‿◡)
It seems like you're discussing a situation in a visual novel where the main character (MC) unexpectedly介入 (barges in) a scene, interrupting a family dinner, and involving themselves in a romantic subplot with the little sister. You're questioning the logic of the MC's actions, considering it's supposed to be a linear, predetermined story.
The confusion arises because, if the plot is fixed and the little sister's romantic ending is positive, it's unexpected for the MC to disrupt the family dynamic, especially if they're aware of the story's progression. However, you also mention that the MC's behavior could indicate they have personal reasons beyond just following the plot, such as their love for yuri.
In your comparison to other stories where the protagonist is aware of the plot, the MC's lack of surprise suggests that the game might not be a straightforward adaptation, which adds to the mystery of their actions.
The character interactions and predictability of the story seem to be a point of dissatisfaction for you, describing them as stereotypical and boring. You find the MC annoying due to their complaints despite knowing their elf master's strength.
In summary, the MC's intervention in the dinner scene appears to defy expectations given the established plot, and their actions raise questions about their motivations and the nature of the story. The story's formulaic elements and lack of surprises contribute to your frustration with the narrative.
I'm having trouble articulating exactly why, but with the recent chapters, I'm not enjoying the story as much as I expected. Despite all the positive reviews, I couldn't fully immerse myself. The plot starts with a seemingly ordinary person transported into a comic without any background explanation. Then, suddenly, he behaves like a villain, effortlessly killing people, which feels unrealistic. The author seems to misunderstand that turning into a villain isn't a simple transition and requires character development. And for what reason? Just because he's infatuated with a girl and wants to boost her image? Frankly, I find the story cringe-worthy, not because of the romantic aspect, but due to the MC's overly dramatic actions, considering he was just an average guy before.
The themes it has has all already been mostly done by others but none have quite executed all these aspects in such a well done fashion. The only thing it lacks is a special aspect, which is why I can only put it on the lower tier of peak fiction.
But don't get me wrong, it's peak fiction. Just not the powerhouse mid-high tier peak fiction is.
It's read you won't regret tho. It'll leave you laughing and crying and angry and all sorts of emotions. For now, I'm going to find me a romance novel to read. I need something wholesome after reading this.
Logic often overshadows fun, which makes masterpieces llike this way rarer than they should
D*mn what abomination did u read well every genre has its good and bad and absolutely godly novels, even shonen ai
It's really igris?