I really can't like the ml ..he send her to jail and almost killed her...her brother is better than her, if only fl end with him...he does love her, his has a girlfriend for whom he sent fl into jail,but he won't allow fl getting close to any man even his own brother .. I mean seriously he mentally sick... such character is much suited for villian not ml ...I don't want to get them together ...bcoz what did to her is unforgivable ...if u don't like abuse and sad story, this is not for u...I thought it was a sweet pet but no..and I quit this story bcoz reading this story is mental torture ...
Burrrr! This chilly ? book is very well done and has a unique storyline that is hard to find. Longwei has got quite the adventure in store for him. I read all the free chapters before I even knew I had done so! Give it a try!
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I should explain that the human body has been doing this for thousands of years, it's called the excretory system. Perhaps the character's special power is two very good kidneys and an excellent quality liver. The secret is a magic formula called staying hydrated. Have you drunk water today?
I have no clue what I'm reading 90% of the time. you seem to be trying so hard to make this seem like an original story.... but it's a fan fic, simple as that, so making it so confusing and convoluted. no need for some overly complex grand design. 22 chapters in and the story has barley anything to do with douluo. of your going to make a douluo fanfic then do that. this isn't your original world stop making it so complex as if this was an original story. ruins the whole purpose of it being a fanfic. otherwise take out the douluo stuff, and make an original world and sick with it, or get rid of the weird af system and multiple reincarnators and trial candidates or what ever the heck is going on here. it just doesn't work. fanfics are ment to use original works and twist it around, while your trying to make an original work and add other non original stuff into it.
This story is nothing but kissing, licking, and touching. You will get bored very quickly in the early 30 chapters...I mean very very boring ? that you are guaranteed to get a headache to continue reading. You have to force yourself to continue reading until pass chapter 30 or else you might stop reading this novel altogether and never come back again because it's hard to got hooked to this novel in the early chapter.
It was a good story, even if was pretty simplistic and not very original. The translation was actually good up to chapter 429, unfortunately the translator seems to have abandoned the work and someone is just uploading machine translation. A sad and agonizing death to what could have been a good middle-tier work,
So the MC Ren is like a textbook himself.... It feels like another Ye Xiu from King's Avatar for me xD But the only difference of these two is that Ye Xiu is a top-tier player that retired (More exactly like he was kicked out from the team) from the professional team but he 10 years worth of gaming experience while our MC Ren here had 10 years worth of knowledge and was rebirth to the past ^_^From the start, although it might looked like the usual start for any rebirth novels out there but for me, the author execute well on how to deliver each scenes and the world-building is widely explained.I hate that leeching guy Roni since in the past, he was the one who spread about Ren's background and it also saddens me that Ren's parents, especially his father died in the previous life and his mother had bedridden because of illness. Keep writing! ^_^ I love this novel already! ^_^
actually good simulation novel where the mc can simulatie his life. this novel is above avarage compared to other simulation related novels but still not pergect 4,5/5 .not giving a 5 becuse there is too much faceslapping which is super annoying
35 chapters so far and I'm really enjoying this so far. really hope it gets picked up.d77jw7k7wj7smme7me7jw6j6wj8mwpkw8ksols8kw8k8p
can someone tell me what year this is based off of it seems old timey but not at the same time also if someone could recommend manga or other novels like this I'd love it
the book is exciting and a relief for boredom, the main character is also an interesting personality and i look forward to even more of his feats.