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I tried really hard to get into this book but only made it to chapter 300 ish. There is just no drama or real meat to this book. No big enemy, no rival, and no real reason to read the book. MC just goes where told does what he's told, and that's it. I keep hoping for a time skip to get to the real story, but it hasn't happened. writing is great, and MC's party is fine (everyone else is a bit two-dimensional and nearly identical). If there was some actual plot to this book, it would be great.
Hello Author here. Thank you for giving your time to read this novel of mine. This is my first novel and I hope all of you can instruct me on my shortcomings in this novel
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Hi ate Clyyy i miss youuu po! Excited to read again sa mga new books mo hehehe...... Latooorrrr I'll read this newly book mo po LoveyouuateClyy!
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I'm greatly enjoying what the first opening chapters have brought. The investment for the characters haven't peeked yet for me, as is, I do look forward on that changing. Same for world build. Overall, this has been a neat look and I can't wait to come back for more.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
from what I've read, this is a very intriguing story. it started off slow, but I prefer my stories like this, so it was a plus for me. I didn't get bored during this, and blew threw a bunch of chapters at one go without realizing it. I love the sci-fi aspect, especially the black hole. astronomy lover you see. and if u love sci-fi, like me, you should totally read this!
After he gave the gold coins to the old man, the librarian stared greedily at the gold coins for some seconds unable to believe his own eyes, but he quickly adjusted himself and thanked the customer, however, Arthur ignored him, he picked the books and left the building, the old man didn't stop speaking as he shouted at Arthur to come back if he needed any sort of book .'He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have' even though the old man got a whopping 220 gold he still wanted more, human greed is really the worst thing in them....Author... just stop...because a business owner trying to get a high paying customer to return is definitely the dangerous and evil greed of humanity... It's not like they're just trying to get enough money that they can live well.Greed only becomes a dangerous trait when the person's demand for something will never be satisfied, and they'll go to any length to try and collect that thing anyway. So if I loved gold, and I could never get enough, and so I ran around killing anyone as long as they had gold. That would be when greed becomes a legitimately negative trait. Did the old man do something like that? No, he's just running a business. Just chill out with the 'humans are inherently evil and disgusting' ****, man. If you're going to try and talk about the greed that humans can hold in their heart, at least think about what's actually happening in the story you're writing first.
Another one, huh. Whatever, when I first started writing this novel, I never really knew what to expect but I am truly overwhelmed by the support. Anyway, I can say this is the longest and my best work so far so I really, really hope you like it.
We've seen spider, fox, ant and slime. And now the author present you with his creative way of writing, a snake reincarnation!I say, who tf care about a little problem of grammar. I for one don't come for a novel to learn language. As long the words reaches me, the world is there, the character is there. So this novel did well sketching interests.I recommend you this novel, to follow an adventure that you wouldn't have in real sad life.