This novel truly is a gem, far beyond the quality that even most top ranking novels on this page aspire to have.The writing, characters, story, worldbuilding, everything leaves me craving for more chapters, and like another user said, it’s excellent.
The story is pretty interesting,the first chapter is very catchy and funny...This novel is very unique ...if you are not fan of little bit grammar mistakes than its book is not for you... after 60 chapter the mc is become more catchy and awesome as passing chapters... I love the way author leading this masterpiece...keep the good work..
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Story is good, please realise more chapter???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's like the author had multiple story ideas and put them into a mishmash of one.He has two simultaneous storylines going on, for the ml and fl.But it was soooooooooooooo arbitrary. Like the story style changes completely from the first dozen chapter.The author tells the reader to read every other chapter if we prefer one protag over the other.But then why even write the story that way?I can't go on reading a story knowing I am probably going to miss half of it. I read till chapter 66, so I know if you read only every other chapter, you would miss a BUNCH of infodumps and worldbuildings. So what's even the point of saying " If you prefer to only read one or the other lead, just read every other chapter of your preference." if the reader is missing a lot of the technical details.And it's honestly hard to get immersed in a story where each next chapter is about another protagonist.So rather than multiple good stories, we have a mediocre one.Not worth the time. I gave story dev a 1 star.The author also used 2 different time units, for usual things he uses day, minute, second, week, year etcetc but then he inserts ancient chinese time units like shi, shun, ke. Its very confusing.The writing does improve though. but it's still very confusing.
In my history of reading cultivation, no, any novel, I have found myself detesting the common tropes. This is mostly because of repetitiveness, which I also hate. This novel breaks that. And I love it for it. It starts questioning things that are the reader usually questions. The character growth is impressive, and the author is active on discord. I am in love with this novel and what it will become.
love it................................., ..........love it, love it, love it, love it...... ................................................
Author shows an improvement as he progresses through the chapters. Something on my mind would be in the latest chapter, the partnership that forms between N and A. It reminds me a little of two thieves plotting a grand heist before it all happens. The image of partnership comes across clearly but there seems to be something off about it. All the best, yeah!
Nothing in-depth to read here. I just like the story so I will review it so more people might see it. Still hate 140 character limit. 654321
I absolutely love this book. Bean reading it for almost a year now and I hope to continue reading it for years to come. The characters are well thought ot and developed with thither own personalities. No cookie- cutter character troupes send basic every guy is evil and every girl is beautiful/ in live with the MC. Plot armor is there of course but is not so thick as not ti be ever overcome. The MC is smart, tactful, honest, devious, lucky, but not all powerful. You can honestly feel the roots the MC head to dig himself out from to climb his way towards the top. The In- game aspect of the story is exciting to the point of addiction, and the RL-aspect of the game is a nice and welcome addition to the story that it's both well thought out and necessary. If I could recommend this story directly to a hundred peaple I would ragland it to a thousand. If I could give the story ten stars I would want to give it twenty. If you want a great story, with twist and turns, detailed but easy to follow plot, and manageable info- dumps that don't rant on and on. This is your kind if book.
At long last my seclusion has finished. i wonder if the exp sect is still around.good to see this amazing work still has updates. Unfortunately, its looks like its not appreciated enough like in the old days.
Bueno ya espero ver qué se tire alas hermanas tan y bueno esa yun bi aún no está pidiendo pollas los dragones son lujuriosos x naturaleza esperemos ver qué sudeda ah futuro