The pack leader looked up at Loreine before resigning and letting out a low growl toward the rest of the pack, telling them the battle was over and they had lost.
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"If you have any problems, please let me know. I will be right outside until you are ready."
Albus finished munching, then thought a bit, it didn't look like August was asking about the whole state of affairs, just the incident. "Something is off with Hades, one of their factions seems to be looking for something or someone in secret. I don't know much more than that. But - well, knowing just this much was enough for them to destroy our ship, so--"
"Well what's the holdup, let's split up," Fred said as he and the girls went to the left.
With such a short roster for school, you wanted to honestly stay home. However, just as you began to edge towards your option towards one restful day, another enormous BANG echoes through the rooms of your house, followed by a worried yet sweetened feminine whimper.
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Even the system couldn't bear to see this in action, quickly killing off the leader with one thrust.
The entire story is fantastic. It's easily one of the best web novels I've read. My only complaint is that the author is too sensitive to people's opinions. A few negative comments, which every novel has, and he just stops writing. I understand how he probably feels, but he lets down his real fans too easily. If he toughens up and starts writing again then I'll change this review.
ty for the fast pass nothing against your book
I’m very curious and confused about this I’ll wait and see how this goes
The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.