Random review from the author here mostly to tell readers more of what to expect. This novel is a concept of mine that I wrote when I was starting out as a writer a while back when I wrote mostly to just test things out, but lately, now that I've started to write longer works, I've gotten a creative itch to try to pick this back up.So, without further ado, what to expect from the get go that I feel makes this novel concept a little more unique:System/LitRPG/Evolution-I'll be honest and say I always had a kind of issue with the system genre in that most of the time, many novels have MCs that have a system that seems completely out of place with the established setting which exists solely as a means to make the MC stronger. I wanted to give the 'system' of this novel a more natural feel to it, and as a result, it is simply the evolutionary/upgrading process that the MC, a nonhuman, constantly evolving alien creature much like the zerg from starcraft, uses to consume and evolve with. Which brings me to another point: Non-human MC-I have already written a non-human MC novel on this website, but the more I write it, the more I realize I could have explored the concept a whole lot more instead of having a character that was human at core.Here, the MC is completely inhuman, an alien monster that was bred in a cocoon and meant only to destroy and consume. As a result, it is cold, ruthless, and inhuman in many ways.I do plan on developing this MC's character so that it does not stay the same forever, but I will keep the core of its character as being fundamentally inhuman. It will never, as a result, become human for any extended period of time. That was a long read, but hopefully that was informative. Once again, thanks for reading, and though I hope you as a reader enjoy my writing, I can totally understand if it is not to your liking as well.
Reading your book is like a trip I am willing to take once,twice and again. The development of the story from the initial chapter is absolutely beautiful and I can't wait to read more. Guy is a character with a promising feats. I love the updating stability.
I used to be a fan of Indian mythology and I like where the story is going so far .Hope this one will break the records of your other one on Webnovel.
good read so far I am by chapter 3 but this far it's been good the plot is different I love plot twist and this book definitely has potential to expand well done author
another novel and another 5 star drop review! might i say that i will not say anymore because of the five stars? ok. i will not say more. ciaaaooo
Very good ☺️...................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This novel is a hidden gem. I never read a novel who do the reincarnated in a game this way. The heroines are really fun and the mc is fighting for his live.
The mc actually uses his knowledge to get powerful without to depend on his system. The system is more like a map that show him hints how to act and doesn’t make him op without instantly.
Now to the bad part of the story. The grammar and structure are sometimes really bad. It doesn’t make the story unreadable but it do make it confusing sometimes. The author knows it and is re-editing his novel. It gets better in the later chapters and you can see how the author keeps improving. Maybe the author could think about getting a editor to help him with the grammar.
Overall I’m very happy to find this novel and hopefully it gets the recognition it deserves.
This novel is one to keep, because the plot is very structured and prepared. The development of the book isn't all over the place but it's in one conga line, and that helps keep the reader interested.
This novel is one of the two novels that have somewhat famous authors. This is the worse of the two. From the author of the very stressful to read "Pocket Hunting Dimension" we get this novel. This fuses Lu Ze's little cheat with Super Gene's power system so if ur into that then enjoy. For those wondering if I would rank this novel from all the novels of this batch I'd say its 4th out 6.
Outstanding Novel and Very Catchy Plot. ❤❤❤ From the very beginning, it is gripping and makes you curious.Good Work, Author. ???❤?Release More Chapters.
This seems interesting.
Absolutely loved it till atleast the big tournament in 2nd year. Has all the stuff that makes a xianxia great, is super engaging and has a rare smart MC. Same with the romance, amazingly well done. That scene with the stars gave me flashbacks of watching the iconic Bakemonogatari confession scene. Really liked it. What I didn't like was the MC resetting his talent to 5 stars. Seemed like the only not perfect card dealt to him in this life was also taken away. Completely random & unnecessary too since he was already making his way around it. Also didn't like the entire 5 élément stuff. Almost every xianxia MC have that, kinda sick of it now. Imo authors should not just give their MC everything. Give him metal, or wood or wind or water affinity. Let him be stronger in some areas and weaker in others cause of it. And let him use his knowledge to work around these weaknesses. 5 élément MC, or fire/lightening are so generic they just feel bland in a way, makes me kinda disappointed since the novel is pretty great otherwise.Still its just minor issues. All in all, great read. Definitely recommended.