This is a pretty unique take on the whole Xanxia/Wuxia style of writing. Sort of based on a science background at first but quickly devolves into the nonsense of "understanding the laws of things" essentially Dao's. Still falls into the pitfall that somehow every culture in this FANTASY world is somehow only chinese and chinese culture based which makes the story 1 dimensional. All in all these novels aren't really great writing, but they pass the time decently enough. The novel starts off pretty unique but after a couple hundred chapters devolves into the same old same old from Tomatoes. Good try in the beginning but fizzles out to blandness and unoriginal ideas later in the story.
Great read people, kinda difficult with all the branches in world building but it definitely keeps you interested and your interest piqued. I almost found it hard to put it down. Truth be told I picked it up as filler while waiting for other stories to update and low and behold it quickly became what I would consider one of my favorites and main stories. I have no clue how this crazy author keeps all the various characters and twist straight but they do and they do it beautifully. Thanks too this crazy sla...cough Author for your hard work I personally really appreciate it.
I thought it was gonna be interesting but it starts getting a bit redundant and predictable. Good time waster but I wouldn't spent my coins on it. Sorry.
Auto nope because the ml puts 0 thought into who to protect he clearly isnt much of a soldier if he cant even plan and do backround checks on who he plans to protect then pick someone who deserves it
The world, story and characters are great and quiet original for wuxia novel. Many culture are present among African, Chinese, Japanese and westerner.But the writing is really bad. Repititions and typing errors are common among other annoying things and sometimes the writing feels of, the characters know things they shouldn't or you feel you missed something that wasn't told.Honestly, I can't recommend this novel due to the writing that gets on my never. But if you are lenient on it, it's an excellent story with good characters.
Nothing too adventurous, since a lot of the themes are very familiar, but the writing quality is better than most. Sadly the plot development and writing style is quite immature, often childish, lacking descriptions in some places, and thrusting the reader too quickly into new events and new characters with almost zero build-up in others. Even then it was ok until plagiarized characters started turning up in the story, totally ruining it.I do enjoy a cheeky little homage, with a little wink wink nudge nudge here and there, but bringing it up more than once is obnoxious. Just have your moment and move on, let the reader at least pretend you didn't steal a character, other-wise just tag it as fan-fiction so those of us expecting some originality can bypass it. Blatant plagiarism totally ruins a story for me, and I just can deal with it. Just don't do it, guys. Just don't.
as Chinese i can tell you guys that as novel progress it gets better and better unlike other novels.Just do not watch anime because anime is really made for money and it is really bad one.
Can we just take a moment for Zeng Yumei's dialogue because it is absolutely perfect? The woman speaks with this warm, natural kindness that feels completely authentic. 'Silly girl, the porridge's already done. No need to add more wood.' 'Good child, go rest outside. The kitchen's full of smoke and soot. Don't dirty such beautiful clothes.' Every line feels like something a real Chinese mother-in-law would say — caring but not overbearing, practical but gentle. And the garlic scene! Qingyan saying she doesn't eat garlic, and Zeng Yumei just quietly setting it aside and saying 'So that's it. I'll remember. From now on, we won't put garlic in the cooking anymore.' That's it. No drama, no 'but I always cook with garlic,' no making the girl feel bad for being picky. Just immediate accommodation. This is how you write a good mother-in-law character. The contrast with Wei Yongqiu's dialogue is fascinating. 'She's obviously trying to win us over. We'll see how long she can keep up the act.' You can hear the cold calculation in every word. And Jiang Decheng's resigned sighs — 'Why did our son have to marry her?' — it's all conveyed through dialogue without any narration telling you how to feel. Qingyan's dialogue is interesting too. She's polite but not submissive, warm but guarded. When she says 'Auntie, whenever it rains from now on, you should just rest. I'll handle the cooking and chores' — there's genuine warmth there but also this underlying current of someone who's trying to earn her place. And the village women's gossip by the river feels so natural, the way they speculate and judge and then move on. The author's narrative voice is also worth noting — it's close third person that stays firmly with Qingyan's perspective, letting us hear her internal calculations and observations without ever breaking into omniscient commentary.
owoww another book . (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻
nice story thanks
So hooked! I can't wait to read more. I've followed this story from Book 1 and I love it!!!!
While there are errors in the writing style and that can cause some confusion, the story line is great and the bones of this book are amazing. 10/10 recommend.