She said that everything is okay, and they can come in if they want.
"This, your majesty will have to ask yourself."
"I'm still reeling from the fact that I devoured an entire book in one sitting! The author's masterful storytelling and skillful plotting had me hooked from start to finish. The writing was engaging, the characters were well-developed, and the story was utterly addictive. I'm in awe of the author
Good story, the plot is interesting and the characters are well developed. Still, I want to give you a few tips from a fellow author that can imho improve your writing... Try to drop the "he said," and "she said" in every dialogue line it's kind of distracting. Another thing is you should focus less on every mundane thing that Max does - remember you are writing a novel, not a journal. So focus primarily on things important for the plotline. But overall I think it has potential so keep writing!
writing is good..sometimes name of character didnt't change...looks exactly copied story
I like the scientific view of magic in the story. Even though the setting of the story is of another novel, I still like it overall. I can't wait for more chapters. ?
Apparently, reviewing one's work is a shameless tradition of Webnovel, and I shall follow through with it ?Jokes aside, I'm not fit to judge my own work, because for me, it's something I worked hard on and of course, I will find it interesting. So I will leave away any judgment. It's up to you to tell me what you think of it :DDon't, however, be fooled by the low number of reviews and collections, it's only because I couldn't update daily during the promotion period for new books, which lowered the exposure.Worry not, though, for I've got a good number of chapters stacked, so, the daily update is on!!Please enjoy it ?
i have a good laugh, highly recommend ❤️
I believe the author has a lot of creativity and it totally shows in this book. the characters are well thought out and the world that has been created is rather unique. there are different new concepts being introduced which all are awesome. I have just read the first 3 chapters so far, and I can't wait to see how the story continues
Not bad since Author has English as 3rd language. Though there's a need for proofreading and fixing punctuations~~ Overall the story is easy to follow.
This novel is made to measure for me, I will read it when I have more chapters, I hope it is good, since I have many expectations...140 characters? really? ok
I'll wait for 200 chaps. Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore Bruvkek. gross gore