I'm in support of your book, you have got my support, just keep it up with the interesting story line ???
Awesome novel. I really love sci Fi novels and this one is really goodKeep it up authorCan't wait for more chaptersss
PS I only meant to get the chapter 9 before I mail it totally throw it on the back burner pretty muchanywho let's get back to the complaint part during chapter 9 when the main character figure out or saw or even when I honestly don't care care realized about injured now during the same heart and sing it just before they come in and they were talking about Boosie part and I stinky married to have the healing if you mix in with it why not he used to healing part similar same thing with the whole check out your belly now show your ability to the guy yes but it won't be impossible to use as a wake up you need besides all of that why not show your family and you order and I don't get it wrong when she yeah but when you want nothing to do the testing and special after showing him for him as a quote and quote farmer want to see the show him and his ability and you back to the story seriously what type of healing belly don't use that towards their family especially when they don't know and besides that why go out for a healing pot a little healing potion mind you never mind and Johnny might free or to begin with so how in the world he's going to explain how in the world and he got the potion with most likely a pretty expensive early not ask or to normal people in conclusion the main character they're pretty stupid ability that he has like it doesn't make any emotions we had to help or act like we you don't have that idea you just stupid am I so one more thing about the test what type of idiot only being very proudful and one skin only see a farmer I meant don't worry kids this week I will at least check check twice or even three times not just once and nearly assume he have a farmer telling that's it stupid my opinion that was mine and one reason I guess okay tomorrow there's mind you it on tonight bye
Hi, Just writing a Review to Encourage The Author to Make EVEN More Incredible Chapters, and Increasing the Rating and Number of Reviews I Guess.
The writing and characters are illogical and unless the mc lives in a different world where there is no law and order it makes no sense. People do whatever they want and hospitals throw dead bodies out on the sidewalk. Judges seemingly dont do their jobs anymore and people are illogicaly dumb. Mind you I have only read the first chapter and I will try to read more but if this is a habit then no I dont recommend this story in the least.
I think the author puts it the best when he says that it is a slow burn. The writing quality is good, not many glaring mistakes and the story seems to be coming along nicely. For a first work, the author seems good enough, surely he'll improve as the story goes along. This seems like a gradual buildup kind of deal. I feel like the story has done a good job dodging a the cliches and so far, it seems like the MC isn't going to get a sudden cheat that will let him uncripple himself. Overall, I'd say, I recommend a read, at least.
the translation is horrible, it's one of the worst I've ever seen...................,.......................................................
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strong guy takes possesion of a new and weak body a lot of time after his defeat, in other novels the mc just goes on their faceslapping journey, this guy intead bothers with information gathering and testing to make his knowledge up to date, and while gathering power in secret he needs to pay attention to not leave any track of his works because he is not yet the smartest or strongest in the continent. thats a pretty good thing for me
Extremelt inconsistent. Felt like two different novels. So yeah. People are thirsty so they’ll prob give this 5 stars for the dual cultivation
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