Filling up the minimum letter count so that I can shamelessly review my own novel as a masterpiece.
Very bad translations. Translator has OMITTED a lot of stuff. Even changed the meaning of few lines! More info: http://forum.novelupdates.com/threads/sorcerers-journey-needs-better-translation.41215/Good job Qidian International for such good quality translations.
this is really good. I stand by my ratings. Some that I have read written by people with English as their first language had worse grammar than this. I recommend you give it a read
At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me.Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!
I've read the first 49 chapters, and so far, I have nothing serious to complain about. The protagonist has a tragic past that adds depth to the character, providing an interesting path for development. The world where the story takes place offers many fascinating possibilities.The only thing I have to complain about is the changes in narrative perspective and when the author reveals something that will happen in the near future, only to later return to the present and describe how that thing happened. Both complaints are based on my opinion, and others may find them positive.I hope the author continues writing this novel and improves more and more.
This is a really great novel!Has a lot of potential, like, God-tier to be honest!That is how great this novel can be ?PS: Not an exaggeration.
This story is really good the relation between host and system is quite interesting ...slow pace at start but after exam it becomes fast enough ...it lacks badass moments for MC as its also focuses on side character which is good but u should try to make the MC more badass and dominating ...disciples should be more respectful towards sect leader even if their character is cunning towards other disciple but they should be utmost respectful towards MC and try to make some scenes where we can see city people's talking about his deeds and all
I had a big review but I accidentally pushed the back button, now I don't care, all I have to say is that the MC can't cultivate ever again and is just a mortal with a big(and broken) soul who can 'supposedly' as the author says it "cultivate in the new way" which is basically just non-sense about using runes... a.k.a talismans, which MC was the king of...But now it seems I'm gonna have to deal with this ****ty package they've left behind, whatever
I expected much from this novel. Way too much.Although confusing during the first few chapters, it evolved wonderfully.The story line is pretty good with some decent twist and turns to keep you hooked. Until random powerful characters shows up out of nowhere to mess up what could have been a good climax. Once was tolerable, but this keeps happening now. It's like the author doesn't want anyone to die.What happens when you've read over two hundred fifty chapters and none of the major enemies (There's a LOT of them) don't die at all because they all of a sudden gets saved by stupidly random events. It gets boring quckly.Sigh. For the purpose of word count, the author decides to mess it all up. I hope it gets better. But for now, this is so anticlimactic.The current arc is so disappointing.
I thought it would be good. I'm disappointed.
It has great story development with a very in depth world building. This is one of my favorite books and I come back everyday to read the new release chapters.
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