*Senshi Flying Raijins out of there*
In her previous life she'd lived in isolation, hidden in a large hospital room even though she longed for someone to talk to, After a while, Lee appreciated the silence, she got so used to it that any intrusion to her space of silence put her off
"Sigh, so, what do you want to happen?" Cyrus sighed as he resigned himself on keeping lay low as he looked at the young mistress seriously.
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just here to review for a fastpass event
I think the story is somewhat very not bad
Love seeing football novels in here. Seems like it will be pretty good! Hope you can keep it up!
love this novel so farzhouzhou she's so funny and cute?????????????
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So mediocre I can't go on, the author Seema to portray Hunan emotions quite well in parts, e.g. when he's about to fight, everyone laughs at him, but when he's in danger they feel bad, then he whacks on an "inspiring speach" where some random chick Rob's them of there reward that they earned and is like life's not fair, do you think aliens play fair? And they all feel inspired with stars in there eyes thinking they've Beena frog in a well..... That **** doesn't happen.Also spineless mc pisses me off
Yeow author here! Just wanted to rate my novel.This is actually my second novel, but I messed up the first one so I pretty much have written this just to get experience in writing. So yeah, I have pretty much taken the concept of RI (actually I stole it :>) because I like it so you can be mad at me however you like later on. I'll try to see how this will go since I butchered the power system of my first work making my work a mess so I tried writing this instead to see if I can improve my skills.If you are wondering what I felt about my work, I actually feel like I have committed an unforgivable sin for creating this abomination so I'll give this 3 stars first and change it later when I felt confident about it. I can't guarantee anything with my work other than the stability of updates since I am way ahead of the current chapters, so if you just want to spend your time since you have already run out of novels to read then I suggest reading this trash story of mine!That's all! Peace out!
I've only read the prologue but I have to leave a comment on thisOne of the best prologues on this entire site. It actually does the job of hooking you in, I felt like one of the demons listening to the middle age mans story. Gave me goosebumps