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I love this story. Especially how original and genuine it seems like. I don't feel as if I'm reading one of those clichés that only have a goal of churning chapters and word count without considering the storyline. I look forward to how this story will look like in the future. I'm happy to have found this gem.
It's a great story, I live the dynamic between characters. The worldbuiding is already there since it's set in the real world. I'm excited to see what happens next and how the story plays out.P.s great writing and decent editing not too many obvious errors.
I, Lord 7th, really enjoy this novel. It's really too good to be on Webnovel. My favorite aspect of the novel is how it switches to different characters of the novel. This set the mystery of the MC. Who thought we know well in the beginning, but the more time we spend away from him. The more time we wonder what changes about him. Did we truly know him from the beginning? Is he even the main character?Plus the story is named after my brother so I decided to read it.
Surname Lin, First name Feng with a tag of 'siglefemalelead' hmm now I'm interested. jjnnnwjwjjjjjjjjfillerfill34fillerfillerfillerfille5f
Not reading the complete novel yet still reviewing it makes this review less authentic, however let me share my thoughts on it.***01. The Plot Mix-Up.The plot of the novel seems good and properly aligned to how a web novel should be. However, the author just dumped a whole lot of plot at the beginning. The start should've been slow with the MC exploring the world and raising his strength in the tutorial village. But suddenly his 'first wife' who's a succubus comes and unfolds the readers some damn big plot, which is a given. However it broke the link to the ongoing plot and made me feel that what's going on right now is a waste of time.In short, it just killed the tension a reader has for the Protagonist. The tension here was the question of how the MC is going to increase his strength and status, how would he survive in the new world.Also, after breaking the beginner plot with the huge plot, the beginner plot continues again which I found very weird. For me the plot just didn't flow naturally.02. The Humiliated Protagonist.Okay, this point might create an argument since there are different types of readers. Some are casual, some are invested in the story but still independent, while others are immersive readers.I am the third kind, an immersive reader.For this reason I don't like if the MC is humiliated or acts like a loser. Since I'm reading a web novel, I'm here for the MC getting high in his life, getting all the wealth, women, power and status.However the beginning was a little disappointing for me. Yes, it's incorrect to criticize just for this since the plot would develop, however the starting chapters unfortunately didn't catch my interest.03. Dumb MCAre dumb MC's bad? Of course not. If the story needs it, a dumb MC can enrich the plot.However, for a moment just imagine.You're suddenly transmigrated into another world. You don't know anything about it, except that you perhaps might be a Protagonist material according to the web novels you've read.You don't know anybody, and you don't know the intentions of the people around you. You don't know the world's history or culture, but you know that there are similar people like him that have come from other worlds.You don't have money or anything, and you didn't even have any clothes when you arrived.So would you make some bet to date a girl, or would you try your best to make yourself safe?Yes, the MC later acquires god-like powers and perhaps nobody would be able to harm him, but what I'm talking here was his attitude.Unfortunately I was here for some scheming and strategies and stuff like that, but the story beginning was a little different.***In the end, this story is not for me, but it might be for you.
I really had no other choice but to add this to my library. It’s witty, entertaining, and well written. A genuine rare diamond that I will be sure to follow along with! You’re doing a fantastic job!
Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing
up to around ch 50 the story was ok then took a nosedive into the trash. early on the mc has a talk with his 300 yo sect master about the concept of cultivation. fee chapters later there are hundreds of people under 20 who are high level cultivators. it's like he started writing a different novel a few chapters in.
A hidden gem I didn't expect finding, I was skepitcal for the first few chapters but now I'm hooked. If you're looking for something new in the VR category this is it.~Hyper
Actually really good story. There doesn't seem to be any action so far but I think its better that way. . .. . ... . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .
amazing.I don't usually rate stories 5 stars bit this one deserved it. it's really well made and perhaps because I like the plot that's why I'm being so biased. And I really can't stretch the 'I like really like this' sentiment. Hopefully, the author would keep updating this and not disappoint