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The world background and the writing style is good. The only negative point is the braindead foolish MC(i read till ch68 in royalroad). No one can be more irritatingly idiotic than this MC and if anyone is more idiotic then they will directly come under the mental illness category. He is so idiotic that he cant even realise the most obvious of things. The author might be making this MC a super idiot lucky b@stard for the progression of the plot but it will definitely lead to the failure of this good story. I hope he realises it soon corrects it. If he does that, this story will be the best. But this wouldnt have been a drawback if the author had named it "The brainless fool that killled the first monster" or if he had said in the introduction that the MC will have some mental problems.
Whoa it's like a Superman background, like the Man of Steel movie where he is weak but with his homeworld people plans to destroy Earth the pressure piled up and strengthens him.One questions guys, how are superhero suits so tenacious, I mean the one wearing the suit gets wounded but the suit is undamaged at all just few dirt and dust stuck, with exception of Iron Man of course that always get his machine damaged but get fixed the next moment.
Overall, this is a great read. I gave this novel a 5 star because clearly the author has spent lots of time in developing this story rather just rushing it through. I'm intrigued and it's worth rereading. But there are parts that are left unexplained. I'll be following this novel to see if it turns out to be a great work.
Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!
That sad moment where your only rating after two weeks is from a random copypasta that went out to just about every fiction. Summary of NPC69’s life in a nutshell.
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where can i find raws anyone ??? can anyone recommend novels like this one. i have read pocket hunting dimension so any other one like this
I gave it a try... and what this novel looks like to me is a debut work. I mean look at that awful first calligraphy, the author should have opted for a painting if they're gonna take a verse from a poem and make it appear lackluster.
Pretty much garbage. kiling machine mc. It is very hard to say anything good about this novel after reading 20 chspters. I like eastern novel but this novel is not a good one.
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yeap as many say it's a copy of the other novel where author added some new elements to the og simple and good novelmade it worse here this one has all the urban Chinese novel cliches Villain : 1 own boss✔️2 rich young master ✔️3 wants FL Probably Face slapping and the rest of BS like Lackeies braking useless showoff✔️MC portraying as intelligent yet brain dead✔️ the only new thing is mc as cheats yet loses to villain making more hateful to read last major point after I read any chapter of digging for survival i feel refreshed but when it comes to this novel I only feel hateful and frustrated hence it's a no go for me