A genuinely good read so far. Looks like the author's shooting for 1-2 chapters daily, which is a great pace. The writing is also great, it gives a lot of context without being an absolute info dump. Other than the slow start (Chapters 1-2, and a bit of 3), this story really does have good potential. Solid 9/10 for me, highly recommended.
I like the story [img=recommend] I hope to read more of it's interesting twist
interesting preview for the first 7 chapter, but I wish there are more, these are simply too few for complete review so I cannot say much. keep up with the good work
Are the chapters really that short?
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Good novel to read easy to understand New race of a character for me and very simple description.
Interesting read but the MC seems to know everything as if he is a literal history book.
I like your previous work quite a bit and although this is in the early stages im quite excited to see how this turns out in the future keep up the good work
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Action in which the author correctly and talentfully pays attention to all elements of the event. We observe the movements of the characters. We see the work of bodies and objects. We understand the past and future of the event. The Action genre demands spectacle and subtle psychology in the flight of fancy. The author is well qualified to do so. The book is written in sharp and literate language. We look forward to the continuance.
Pretty much trash. Imagine helping your enemy heal. Just blackmail them. But no. Author made the Mc a naive brat. He acts calm but he is stupid. "The capital has rules no indiscriminate killing" but yeah the he family poisoned a person. Feels so contradicting. Dropped it.
Overall the novel is pretty good and I don’t see any glaring issues other then I started reading it based on first day in game and this novel doesn’t even take place in game so -1 and secondly he has been checking in for days and not a single billion so -1
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